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by Damien P.
Sat Jul 26, 2014 1:00 pm
Forum: Post your success story
Topic: My gratitude to Ryan! :)
Replies: 3
Views: 7268

Re: My gratitude to Ryan! :)

Congrats mate ;)
Good luck in your life and host country!
by Damien P.
Sat Jul 26, 2014 12:02 pm
Forum: Post your success story
Topic: Finally got a band 8.5!
Replies: 7
Views: 8971

Re: Finally got a band 8.5!

Thanks :) For the reading section, I always tried to finish my section within 50-55 minutes in order to copy my answers on the answer sheet. Then, I managed to see this test as a training for life, studies, cerebral flexibility. And I still think it is. Training for IELTS has helped me to read quick...
by Damien P.
Fri Jul 25, 2014 10:58 pm
Forum: Post your success story
Topic: Finally got a band 8.5!
Replies: 7
Views: 8971

Finally got a band 8.5!

Hey! After three weeks of preparation and my exam on July the 12th, I got an overall band score of 8.5, with 8.5 in Listening, 9 in Reading, 7 in Writing and 8.5 in Speaking. I am a bit disappointed with my writing score since I was quite confident, but I obtained the score required by my university...
by Damien P.
Wed Jul 09, 2014 9:54 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 > Sports and health
Replies: 2
Views: 1567

Re: Task 2 > Sports and health

Thanks! :D
by Damien P.
Wed Jul 09, 2014 4:38 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Tasks 1 and 2 Academic - Could you please comment it?
Replies: 0
Views: 501

Tasks 1 and 2 Academic - Could you please comment it?

Hello! Here is my latest writing test and probably the last one, since I am sitting my IELTS exam in two days. I tried to follow all your former advices regarding the structure and coherence between paragraphs. Could you please give me comments and let me know if it is acceptable, coherent and corre...
by Damien P.
Tue Jul 08, 2014 11:33 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Tasks 1 and 2 Academic - Could you please give comments?
Replies: 14
Views: 3242

Re: Tasks 1 and 2 Academic - Could you please give comments?

Thank you all :)

I will try and give some of my last tasks to an assessor if I find one (IELTS is not a common thing for students in France, since most people do not leave the country to study or work).
by Damien P.
Mon Jul 07, 2014 4:47 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Tasks 1 and 2 Academic - Could you please give comments?
Replies: 14
Views: 3242

Re: Tasks 1 and 2 Academic - Could you please give comments?

Congratulations mate! :D
I must admit that even though I love this forum, I would rather sit and get my exam as soon as possible.
by Damien P.
Mon Jul 07, 2014 3:44 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Tasks 1 and 2 Academic - Could you please give comments?
Replies: 14
Views: 3242

Re: Tasks 1 and 2 Academic - Could you please give comments?

You got such a good score and still have to retake it? :o
How come? Did they ask you to get 8?
by Damien P.
Mon Jul 07, 2014 3:23 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Tasks 1 and 2 Academic - Could you please give comments?
Replies: 14
Views: 3242

Re: Tasks 1 and 2 Academic - Could you please give comments?

Your solution is indeed very good too, since you use the second para to give details about similarities.
by Damien P.
Mon Jul 07, 2014 3:13 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Tasks 1 and 2 Academic - Could you please give comments?
Replies: 14
Views: 3242

Re: Tasks 1 and 2 Academic - Could you please give comments?

I understood you right, then :) However, I've read in some preparatory material (notably on Road to IELTS and Ielts-Exam, for instance) and official corrections that we can finish a Task 1 by stating the overall trend of the schemes/lines/graphs. For this one, I think the important thing is to keep ...
by Damien P.
Mon Jul 07, 2014 2:35 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Tasks 1 and 2 Academic - Could you please give comments?
Replies: 14
Views: 3242

Re: Tasks 1 and 2 Academic - Could you please give comments?

Thank you! Indeed, my first body paragraph for Task 2 could easilly by replaced by my 1st argument, since there are many words in the essay. That being said, I hope it was clear my essay was an opinion one! :p Except from a linear description in Task 1, do you know other viable structures for the in...
by Damien P.
Mon Jul 07, 2014 1:24 pm
Forum: Post your speaking
Topic: A Pronunciation Question
Replies: 3
Views: 1893

Re: A Pronunciation Question

I think your pronunciation is quite good!
Indeed, "Son" is pronounced exactly like "Sun", while "Song" uses a lower and more closed sound, similar to what can be heard in Northern-English accents too.
by Damien P.
Mon Jul 07, 2014 1:11 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Tasks 1 and 2 Academic - Could you please give comments?
Replies: 14
Views: 3242

Tasks 1 and 2 Academic - Could you please give comments?

Good afternoon! Once again, I come to you with a written part I did in 1h, in preparation for my IELTS next Saturday. Could you please give me comments? Since I'm aiming at a band 8, I really want to improve my writing in every possible way. Thank you in advance :) http://i.imgur.com/22oRKXyl.png Th...
by Damien P.
Sun Jul 06, 2014 8:59 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Tasks 1 and 2 Academic - Could you assess my writing please?
Replies: 5
Views: 1672

Re: Tasks 1 and 2 Academic - Could you assess my writing ple

I actually read some examples in the past, in which we could put clauses without verbs as a conclusion. I think this is more discursive than 100% gramatically correct. For example, "...Arguments... Hence our vote against the report." or "Hence the desirability of having formal meeting...
by Damien P.
Sat Jul 05, 2014 12:13 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Tasks 1 and 2 Academic - Could you assess my writing please?
Replies: 5
Views: 1672

Re: Tasks 1 and 2 Academic - Could you assess my writing ple

Many thanks to both of you! :) I took notes about each point and I will apply them for my next writing task. I know it is not easy for non-marker members to assess an essay, nor recommended, but what in your opinion is the grade this essay would get? Indeed, I will work on correcting these flaws by ...
by Damien P.
Thu Jul 03, 2014 6:44 pm
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: IELTS 21 June RESULTS
Replies: 38
Views: 13124

Re: IELTS 21 June RESULTS

Hey! Congrats, your results are still pretty good ;) For the writing, you could appeal in two cases I think: - You need it (score above 7.0 in order to apply for a university, for instance) - You have largely enough money and time If the amount required to lodge an appeal is somewhat high compared t...
by Damien P.
Thu Jul 03, 2014 4:16 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 > Compulsory teaching of a foreign language
Replies: 7
Views: 4382

Re: Task 2 > Compulsory teaching of a foreign language

There are several ways to write an introduction, since some prefer to state their opinion in it, and others would rather ask a question in order to discuss it later on. In any case, it is generally good to write 2-3 sentences in funnel-like structure: 1 sentence that sets up the environment and gene...
by Damien P.
Thu Jul 03, 2014 4:06 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Tasks 1 and 2 Academic - Could you assess my writing please?
Replies: 5
Views: 1672

Tasks 1 and 2 Academic - Could you assess my writing please?

Hey everyone! Since my test is coming soon, I am preparing Tasks 1 and 2 together, now. Could you please let me know which band level I could approximately get with such a writing? Indeed, I am aiming at a 8. Do you think it is doable with that kind of work? I transcripted everything from paper with...
by Damien P.
Thu Jul 03, 2014 10:28 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 > Compulsory teaching of a foreign language
Replies: 7
Views: 4382

Re: Task 2 > Compulsory teaching of a foreign language

Although essay is good in terms of structure and vocabulary range, I personally felt introduction should have been more clear. Opinion and your stand should be clear in Introduction. Indeed, thanks! Generally we can adopt two methods: give the opinion directly in the introduction, or in the conclus...
by Damien P.
Mon Jun 30, 2014 4:11 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 > Sports and health
Replies: 2
Views: 1567

Task 2 > Sports and health

Hey everyone! Once again, I come to send you my latest essay! Could you comment it and give be a band score please? Indeed, while rewriting it on the computer I noticed some grammar and vocabulary mistakes. Which grade would you give it, then? Thanks! :) Some people say that the best way to improve ...
by Damien P.
Sun Jun 29, 2014 9:38 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: A question from speaking part 3
Replies: 4
Views: 1714

Re: A question from speaking part 3

You can begin by stating that "when" can have two meanings: 1) "How": then the picture will gain value by displaying something that is worth something for certain people, that is "rare" for them. Paparazzis know their job for example. They might focus on information tha...
by Damien P.
Sun Jun 29, 2014 6:23 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 > Knowledge and books - Could you please assess it?
Replies: 2
Views: 798

Re: Task 2 > Knowledge and books - Could you please assess i

Thank you a lot :)
It is true that the second one could have been bigger, even more since the essay is only 252 words.

I read and commented on your letter too.
by Damien P.
Sun Jun 29, 2014 6:20 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: GT Task 1 letter
Replies: 2
Views: 2058

Re: GT Task 1 letter

Very nice letter! :) Excellent grammar and appropriate vocabulary I believe. The only modifications I would apply would be: - Try to explain a bit more about your current situation at the beginning of the letter: "I am one of your tenants and was supposed to take the appartment next month...&qu...
by Damien P.
Sun Jun 29, 2014 1:57 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 > Knowledge and books - Could you please assess it?
Replies: 2
Views: 798

Task 2 > Knowledge and books - Could you please assess it?

Hey? Could you please assess the essay I wrote today? I would like to know which are the flaws and mistakes, and even if it is long enough. Indeed, MS Word counted 252 words (I firstly wrote it on paper, then transcripted it here). Thank you in advance :) It has been said, “Not every thing that is l...