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by saran
Sun Oct 13, 2013 6:31 am
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: oct 11 general melb
Replies: 1
Views: 1830

oct 11 general melb

reading gains knowledge or not???discuss both views


new a swimming pool inside the centre or outside..write a letter to planning committee
by saran
Mon Sep 16, 2013 1:13 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: PLEASE COMMENT ON MY ESSAY .
Replies: 3
Views: 2306

Re: PLEASE COMMENT ON MY ESSAY .

use small letter ;it dont use capital It
by saran
Mon Sep 16, 2013 1:09 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please give some tips on my essay .
Replies: 14
Views: 6014

Re: Please give some tips on my essay .

hi tina, Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Nowadays, Change in life is almost inevitable rather than a choice in the fast pace world(in the fast...
by saran
Sun Sep 15, 2013 4:18 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please give some tips on my essay .
Replies: 14
Views: 6014

Re: Please give some tips on my essay .

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Nowadays, change in life is almost inevitable rather than a choice in (this) the fast pace world . Hence, Some...
by saran
Sun Sep 15, 2013 2:39 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please give some tips on my essay .
Replies: 14
Views: 6014

Re: Please give some tips on my essay .

hi tina,
reframe and post the essay again...i think i will be online quite some time to post my essay and letter...thx
by saran
Sun Sep 15, 2013 2:18 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please give some tips on my essay .
Replies: 14
Views: 6014

Re: Please give some tips on my essay .

hi tina, Introduction : view of otherss supporting 1 PARA 1 : taking about the concept of static life in positive, yes giving positive example of the same ,yes should i discuss the disadvantage also in the same para ?,no i prefer not to talk about the dis in same para conclude this particular concep...
by saran
Sun Sep 15, 2013 1:06 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please give some tips on my essay .
Replies: 14
Views: 6014

Re: Please give some tips on my essay .

some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. The pace of life has shown a drastic shift over the last few decades due to the advancement in the technology ...
by saran
Sun Sep 15, 2013 11:50 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please give some tips on my essay .
Replies: 14
Views: 6014

Re: Please give some tips on my essay .

hi raj,
post it here
by saran
Sun Sep 15, 2013 11:42 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please give some tips on my essay .
Replies: 14
Views: 6014

Re: Please give some tips on my essay .

hi tina,
can I try review it or ?????
i am confused y u r writing firstly and secondly.....write on the other hand
by saran
Sat Sep 14, 2013 4:51 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hi Ryan , please mark my essay .
Replies: 6
Views: 5333

Re: Hi Ryan , please mark my essay .

hi tina,
thanks.try to reframe the essay and post it here
by saran
Sat Sep 14, 2013 4:41 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Nursery school
Replies: 6
Views: 3673

Re: Nursery school

hi tina and duong, please help me as well i am also on the same boat TOPIC: Should children go to nursery school prior to their primary studies? Share personal examples in your essay, if applicable. ANSWER: An often debated topic is whether parents should send their children to nurseries before prim...
by saran
Fri Sep 13, 2013 11:44 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hi Ryan , please mark my essay .
Replies: 6
Views: 5333

Re: Hi Ryan , please mark my essay .

hi Tina, it might help you but i remember i never ever reached band 7 first of all we are talking about good health so you have to use good health related sentance in many areas.so try to rephrase it well-being,physical fitness,good shape . Some people think that good health is a basic human need,so...
by saran
Fri Sep 13, 2013 9:17 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: sponsorship letter need feedback
Replies: 5
Views: 2864

Re: sponsorship letter need feedback

hi ryan,
Thank you so much for reviewing my letter. with the help of your video and your comment I believe that I will get 7 band in writing.

Regards,
Saran
by saran
Fri Sep 13, 2013 9:10 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: sponsorship letter need feedback
Replies: 5
Views: 2864

Re: sponsorship letter need feedback

thank you so much Tina once again for your effort.
by saran
Fri Sep 13, 2013 9:08 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: missing letter need feedback
Replies: 4
Views: 3335

Re: missing letter need feedback

thank you so much for your effort Tina.
by saran
Thu Sep 12, 2013 8:59 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: sponsorship letter need feedback
Replies: 5
Views: 2864

sponsorship letter need feedback

You have just found out you’ve been awarded sponsorship for a project you’ve been working on. Write a letter to your sponsor. In your letter • describe the details of the project • explain how the funds will be used
• write a message of appreciation for the support Write at least 150 words.
You do N...
by saran
Thu Sep 12, 2013 7:50 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: missing letter need feedback
Replies: 4
Views: 3335

Re: missing letter need feedback

pls guys...review it...
by saran
Thu Sep 12, 2013 7:25 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: bank letter need feedback
Replies: 13
Views: 8094

Re: bank letter need feedback

hi tina,
thank you so much... trying my best
by saran
Thu Sep 12, 2013 12:09 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: missing letter need feedback
Replies: 4
Views: 3335

missing letter need feedback

You lost something on the train. Write a letter to the stationmaster of your local train station. In your letter • state what the item is • describe where you think you lost it • explain how you can be contacted in the event the item is found Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any ad...
by saran
Wed Sep 11, 2013 11:09 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: bank letter need feedback
Replies: 13
Views: 8094

Re: bank letter need feedback

thanks a lot to tina,raj and luciano.. improved letter...guys pls review it.. You received a letter from your bank stating that you will be charged £35 for a banking service you didn’t use. You know this information is incorrect. Write a letter to the bank. In your letter • write what the erroneous ...
by saran
Wed Sep 11, 2013 12:37 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please check my academic task 2
Replies: 10
Views: 3847

Re: Please check my academic task 2

hi tina,,,
its quiet easy to write about your personal examples and u can justify your personal story...reader does not have a choice to counter attack..if you talk in general he knows what ur taking about...so its my advice to write personal example
by saran
Wed Sep 11, 2013 12:19 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: bank letter need feedback
Replies: 13
Views: 8094

Re: bank letter need feedback

hi tina,

october 11 my exam
when is ur exam...
by saran
Wed Sep 11, 2013 12:14 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please check my academic task 2
Replies: 10
Views: 3847

Re: Please check my academic task 2

hi tina,,, try to use real time example,which is very difficult to counter attack by the reader. for example, take my cousin saran as an example.at the age of 10 he had postural problems , poor eye sight due to strain , persistent headache due to the excess use of computer for gaming............. do...
by saran
Wed Sep 11, 2013 12:04 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: bank letter need feedback
Replies: 13
Views: 8094

Re: bank letter need feedback

With the help of my friends Tina and Raj I tried to reframe the letter…thanks a lot guys. Please feel free to comment on my letter You received a letter from your bank stating that you will be charged £35 for a banking service you didn’t use. You know this information is incorrect. Write a letter to...
by saran
Wed Sep 11, 2013 10:59 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: bank letter need feedback
Replies: 13
Views: 8094

Re: bank letter need feedback

ok tina i will reframe it...and i will post it....thanks a lot....r u doing academic or general..