I agree that I used some strange expressions in here partly because of I want to make my essay sounds academic and ye, it's a double-edged sword. Anyway, I will try to improve next time.
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- Sun Jun 11, 2017 6:09 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please evaluate my essay(Writing task 2)
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Re: Please evaluate my essay(Writing task 2)
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I agree that I used some strange expressions in here partly because of I want to make my essay sounds academic and ye, it's a double-edged sword. Anyway, I will try to improve next time.
I agree that I used some strange expressions in here partly because of I want to make my essay sounds academic and ye, it's a double-edged sword. Anyway, I will try to improve next time.
- Tue Jun 06, 2017 2:19 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: i think have gone against the grain in this essay....please provide your valuable feedback
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Re: i think have gone against the grain in this essay....please provide your valuable feedback
Hi,
In your conclusion, you shouldn't use "In a nutshell" since it is an idiom so try avoid using any kind of idiom. For further information, please visit: https://targetenglish.wordpress.com/201 ... 2-writing/
In your conclusion, you shouldn't use "In a nutshell" since it is an idiom so try avoid using any kind of idiom. For further information, please visit: https://targetenglish.wordpress.com/201 ... 2-writing/
- Tue Jun 06, 2017 2:11 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please evaluate my essay(Writing task 2)
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Please evaluate my essay(Writing task 2)
It has been said that people who read for pleasure have developed imaginations and gained better language skills than people who prefer watching TV. Do you agree or disagree? In this day and age, books and means of media are supposedly the two most common measures in order to gather informations. W...