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by Zoranis
Tue Jul 11, 2017 7:11 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess this Task 2 essay - celebrities benefits and problems
Replies: 0
Views: 29

Please assess this Task 2 essay - celebrities benefits and problems

Please evaluate this essay done by me. Thanks in advance. http://i67.tinypic.com/28wj5aq.png Today, celebrities are more exposed to the limelight of fame than ever before. Being a personality brings some advantages as well as drawbacks comparing to average people. In my point of view, the benefits o...
by Zoranis
Thu Jun 29, 2017 6:28 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my Writing Task 2 - Learning a foreign language at primary school
Replies: 4
Views: 172

Re: Please evaluate my Writing Task 2 - Learning a foreign language at primary school

Thank you Flick!

I think I should study the Cambridge grammar books from beginner levels.
by Zoranis
Fri Jun 23, 2017 9:59 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 2 - Improving public health by increasing sports facilities
Replies: 2
Views: 88

Writing Task 2 - Improving public health by increasing sports facilities

Hello, Please assess my essay. Thanks in advance! http://i65.tinypic.com/r0qduf.png Experts have different opinions about the benefits of increasing the number of sports facilities in public health. The divergence is if this will have a significant impact on public health or not. While one can say t...
by Zoranis
Fri Jun 23, 2017 8:28 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 1 - Italy and Yemen projections for ages of the population
Replies: 2
Views: 129

Writing Task 1 - Italy and Yemen projections for ages of the population

Hello, If it is possible could someone assess my writing task? Thanks in advance. http://i67.tinypic.com/2a4y13k.png The pie charts demonstrate the ages of the habitants of Yemen and Italy in 2000, and what are the predictions for these countries after five decades. The ages are divided in three cat...
by Zoranis
Wed Jun 14, 2017 10:09 pm
Forum: Find IELTS study partners
Topic: <Whatsapp and Skype>groups for IELTS CANDIDATES
Replies: 299
Views: 37980

Re: <Whatsapp and Skype>groups for IELTS CANDIDATES

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by Zoranis
Tue Jun 13, 2017 11:50 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my Writing Task 2 - Learning a foreign language at primary school
Replies: 4
Views: 172

Re: Please evaluate my Writing Task 2 - Learning a foreign language at primary school

Thank you again David for your evaluation!

You are right. I must focus on grammar too. Awful essay this one I wrote. However, I'll improve.

Best regards,
by Zoranis
Tue Jun 13, 2017 11:45 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly evaluate my Task 1 - describing an island
Replies: 2
Views: 101

Re: Kindly evaluate my Task 1 - describing an island

Thank you David for use your time to assess my essay. Feel free to be very strict when checking, I would not complain at all hehe. I know this essay is not good. I am doing essays in the exam time format (20 mintues to this question only), but I know that I have a long way to pursue yet. Thank you a...
by Zoranis
Tue Jun 06, 2017 12:01 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly evaluate my Task 1 - describing an island
Replies: 2
Views: 101

Kindly evaluate my Task 1 - describing an island

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilites. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. http://imgh.us/Task_1_-_IELTS_9.png The maps illustrate the main features of an island with hu...