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by ted_ielts
Sat Jul 01, 2017 5:03 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my task 2
Replies: 2
Views: 100

Re: Please evaluate my task 2

Her'es my edit of your introduction: Some people give little credit and value of studying history as it is unimportant and in their opinion does not have any importance in the modern society. Other people, on the contrary, reckon that the past has noticeable roles in understanding our modern life an...
by ted_ielts
Tue Jun 20, 2017 2:47 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please evaluate my essay
Replies: 3
Views: 118

Re: please evaluate my essay

There's a problem in your introduction. The second sentence begins with "whilst" which is a subordinating coordinator. This makes the clause the follows it a dependent clause. As it's not joined to any other clause (like an independent clause) it is now a sentence fragment. This is a common mistake ...
by ted_ielts
Thu Jun 01, 2017 11:06 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly evaluate Task 1
Replies: 2
Views: 65

Re: Kindly evaluate Task 1

Here's my suggestion: The pie chart explores the various factors responsible for the degradation of agricultural land throughout the world while the table explains how these affected North America, Europe, and Oceania, in terms of percent of land degraded. It is evident that Europe is the most affec...
by ted_ielts
Tue May 23, 2017 11:22 am
Forum: IELTS discussion and general Q & A
Topic: Best IELTS Tips
Replies: 8
Views: 1086

Re: Best IELTS Tips

That's right. It's very useful to watch other students going through the procedure to familiarize yourself with it.
by ted_ielts
Mon May 22, 2017 12:53 am
Forum: IELTS discussion and general Q & A
Topic: Best IELTS Tips
Replies: 8
Views: 1086

Re: Best IELTS Tips

Work on your nerves. I've known some amazing students who just fall to pieces during exam situations. In particular, here in rural China many students have never met a foreigner before and panic during the speaking exam! :o It seems strange, but all their practice just goes right out the window. So ...
by ted_ielts
Wed May 17, 2017 1:39 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing task 2
Replies: 1
Views: 117

Re: Please assess my writing task 2

This has a really good structure. The introduction is great, and each paragraph is well-developed.
by ted_ielts
Sat May 13, 2017 2:18 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: I need your feedback in Task 2 essay! please
Replies: 1
Views: 112

Re: I need your feedback in Task 2 essay! please

Hi! I've corrected your opening paragraph: These days, it seems that there is a plethora of students opting to move to a different country to pursue higher education or further studies. However, there remains some disagreements as to whether the overall effects of this choices have been positive or ...
by ted_ielts
Wed May 10, 2017 2:14 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 Writing (give feedback)
Replies: 5
Views: 266

Re: Task 2 Writing (give feedback)

Here's my suggested changes for your introduction: It is said that children are the future of a nation, as such they should be brought up in a such a way that they turn out to be better citizens. For this reason, some believe that they should be introduced to a more competitive environment at a youn...
by ted_ielts
Wed May 10, 2017 2:07 am
Forum: IELTS book review
Topic: Online Study or IELTS books?
Replies: 2
Views: 1314

Re: Online Study or IELTS books?

It seems to me that there is a wealth of material available free online... but the quality is not always very high. There are many high quality IELTS textbooks out there that are a worthwhile investment.