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by Mdwenzel
Mon May 15, 2017 4:30 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: I would be very grateful if someone could give me some feedback
Replies: 3
Views: 1771

Re: I would be very grateful if someone could give me some feedback

Hello! Introduction is nearly as long as the main paragraphs! I'm not very convinced by the main points. Companies that use trees usually DO plant more - it's how they make money! I'm pretty sure Coca-Cola does not recycle all its plastic. (Which country?) Paying taxes is something companies are re...
by Mdwenzel
Sat May 13, 2017 5:06 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: I would be very grateful if someone could give me some feedback
Replies: 3
Views: 1771

I would be very grateful if someone could give me some feedback

TASK 2 - Academic Hello I would be very grateful if someone could give me some feedback. As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Undoubtedly, enterprises main aim is to make a profit. But, over the last years is common to see bu...
by Mdwenzel
Tue May 09, 2017 3:41 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: I will appreciate some feedback
Replies: 2
Views: 1390

Re: I will appreciate some feedback

Hello! Expose reasons? That means the reasons have never been used before. Change 'contaminated' to 'polluted'. Overall, I think that your points are quite basic. For example, you seem to assume that cost is the only factor when people are travelling. However, there is nothing really 'bad' in your ...
by Mdwenzel
Fri May 05, 2017 11:02 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: I will appreciate some feedback
Replies: 2
Views: 1390

I will appreciate some feedback

Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. In some countries, governments decide to spend money in railways, others in...
by Mdwenzel
Thu May 04, 2017 4:05 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Repost your essays if you want me to check them
Replies: 5
Views: 2692

Re: Repost your essays if you want me to check them

Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. In some countries, governments decide to spend money in railways, others in...