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by Pojke66
Mon Aug 14, 2017 1:42 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please kindly evalute my essay: your comments are really needed
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Please kindly evalute my essay: your comments are really needed

Some people think their parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Other , however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. The topic that how makes children effective and productive members of society is of the crucial impo...
by Pojke66
Fri May 12, 2017 1:18 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess this essay_ really need you feedbacks aim band 7
Replies: 2
Views: 1326

Re: Please assess this essay_ really need you feedbacks aim band 7

Dear David,

Thank you very much for your excellent review.

All the best
by Pojke66
Fri May 12, 2017 1:17 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly evaluate this essay task 2
Replies: 1
Views: 1261

Kindly evaluate this essay task 2

Some people argue that the best way to improve people’s health is to provide the more physical activities’ equipment, while others reckon it is insufficient and other steps should be taken by either officials or public. Although allocating more budgets could be a one solution, this essay agrees othe...
by Pojke66
Tue May 09, 2017 12:28 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess this essay_ really need you feedbacks aim band 7
Replies: 2
Views: 1326

Please assess this essay_ really need you feedbacks aim band 7

For decades, people have been arguing that which place is most suitable for their children to live in and grow up, that is, city or countryside (e.g. Village). Some believe that cities are best places whereas other stands on opposite opinion- growing up in rural area. While living and growing up in ...
by Pojke66
Thu May 04, 2017 9:02 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my essay. Exam on MAY 13.
Replies: 1
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Please evaluate my essay. Exam on MAY 13.

TOPIC: Some people believe it is better for children to grow up in city while other say it is better to grow up in countryside. Discuss both view and give your own opinion. For decades, people have been arguing that which place is most suitable for their children to live in and grow up, that is, ci...