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by shehmed
Tue Aug 15, 2017 11:19 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Feedback on Task 2. I would greatly appreciate if you could give some feedback on it.
Replies: 1
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Feedback on Task 2. I would greatly appreciate if you could give some feedback on it.

(People spend large amounts of time and money on clothes, hairstyles and make up to change their appearance. Is it important for people to be concerned about the way they look? What are the consequences of focussing on physical appearance?) It is often believed that people spend significant amounts ...
by shehmed
Mon Aug 14, 2017 1:52 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly evaluate this essay. I would greatly appreciate if you could give some feedback on it.
Replies: 1
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Kindly evaluate this essay. I would greatly appreciate if you could give some feedback on it.

(Economic growth and development are usually considered to be beneficial both for individuals and for society as a whole. What are some advantages and disadvantages of economic development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.) Economi...
by shehmed
Sat May 06, 2017 4:43 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2: Some people think that school should involve students in deciding on how to run school? Do you agree?
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Task 2: Some people think that school should involve students in deciding on how to run school? Do you agree?

Topic: Some people think that school should involve students in deciding on how to run school? Do you agree? Essay: It is often believed that schools ought to engage pupils in the decision-making of running schools effectively. In my opinion, I agree that students should participate as decision make...
by shehmed
Sat Apr 22, 2017 10:12 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Feedback required on writing task 2 - essay
Replies: 3
Views: 3755

Re: Feedback required on writing task 2 - essay

Thank you for your valuable feedback.
by shehmed
Wed Apr 19, 2017 2:35 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2: feedback plzzzzzzzzzz - Traffic congestion topic
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Task 2: feedback plzzzzzzzzzz - Traffic congestion topic

Topic: The best way to reduce traffic is to pay road toll to drive on busy roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Type: Balanced approach It is often believed that the most effective way to ease traffic is to collect tolls on congested roads. In my opinion, I think forcing people to pay tol...
by shehmed
Mon Apr 17, 2017 3:17 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2: feedback please
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Views: 2005

Task 2: feedback please

Topic: Some people think city life is best for children to grow in, while others prefer countryside life is suitable for children growth. discuss both and give your opinion It is often believed that urban life is ideal for raising children, while others think that rural life is preferable for childr...
by shehmed
Thu Apr 06, 2017 5:09 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Feedback required on writing task 2 - essay
Replies: 3
Views: 3755

Feedback required on writing task 2 - essay

Task 2 topic: Young people spend their free time in shopping malls. This has negative effects on young people and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? It is believed by some that the young pass their leisure time in shopping centers and this produces adverse effects on them and society ...
by shehmed
Sun Apr 02, 2017 4:08 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Feedback required on an essay introduction paragraph
Replies: 0
Views: 1917

Feedback required on an essay introduction paragraph

Essay: It is necessary for parents to attend parenting training course to bring their children up. Do you agree or disagree? Introduction It is believed by some that parents are needed to attend child-rearing programs to raise their children. In my opinion, I agree that parents must have a proper pa...
by shehmed
Sun Apr 02, 2017 12:10 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Need your feedback on Write task 1 letter
Replies: 2
Views: 1413

Re: Need your feedback on Write task 1 letter

Hi David,

Thank you so much.
by shehmed
Sun Apr 02, 2017 12:08 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Check writing: Some people say International sports events help in world peace. Do you agree or disagree?
Replies: 3
Views: 3747

Re: Check writing: Some people say International sports events help in world peace. Do you agree or disagree?

Hi David,
Thank you for your valuable and constructive feedback. I would highly appreciate if you could rate the essay with regard to band score.
by shehmed
Sat Apr 01, 2017 11:51 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Need your feedback on Write task 1 letter
Replies: 2
Views: 1413

Need your feedback on Write task 1 letter

On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter - describe the item you lost -explain how you lost it -tell the insurance company what you would like them...
by shehmed
Sat Apr 01, 2017 11:41 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Check writing: Some people say International sports events help in world peace. Do you agree or disagree?
Replies: 3
Views: 3747

Check writing: Some people say International sports events help in world peace. Do you agree or disagree?

Essay: Some people say International sports events help in world peace. Do you agree or disagree? It is believed by some people that international sports events such as the Olympics, the Football World Cup and the Cricket World Cup, play a vital role to bring together different nations and their peo...