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by altinbek11
Thu Mar 16, 2017 8:51 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing task 2 and give some feedback. I will be profoundly grateful for you support.
Replies: 1
Views: 1203

Please assess my writing task 2 and give some feedback. I will be profoundly grateful for you support.

Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling? It is inescapable fact that the tourism industry has dramatically changed in recent years. The causes of this appear to be focused on three factors, and a number of advantages are available ...
by altinbek11
Tue Mar 14, 2017 3:39 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing task 1 and give some feedback. I will be profoundly grateful for you support.
Replies: 1
Views: 2386

Please assess my writing task 1 and give some feedback. I will be profoundly grateful for you support.

The glance at the graph given illustrates a number of parcels distributed by Federal Express and TNT Mail Service companies over the 80 years from 1920 to 2000. Overall, distribution of parcels by Federal Express wildly fluctuated over the period given whereas TNT Mail Service shows an upward trend ...
by altinbek11
Sun Mar 12, 2017 4:56 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing task 2 and give some feedback. I will be profoundly grateful for you support.
Replies: 1
Views: 1274

Please assess my writing task 2 and give some feedback. I will be profoundly grateful for you support.

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? It is thought by some pedagogical experts that teaching a foreign language at elementary schools is more eff...
by altinbek11
Thu Mar 09, 2017 3:03 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing task 1 and give some feedback. I will be profoundly grateful for you support.
Replies: 1
Views: 1507

Please assess my writing task 1 and give some feedback. I will be profoundly grateful for you support.

The glance at the graph given illustrates the yearly income of three bakeries (namely Bernie’s Buns, Lovely Loaves, and Robbie’s Bakery) in London during the first decade of the 21st century. Overall, Bernie’s Buns and Robbie’s Bakery both saw a considerable increase in income over the period given ...
by altinbek11
Sat Mar 04, 2017 8:21 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing task 2 and give some feedback. I will be profoundly grateful for you support.
Replies: 1
Views: 2356

Please assess my writing task 2 and give some feedback. I will be profoundly grateful for you support.

Some people think that in order to deal with the problem of congestion in cities, privately owned vehicles should be banned in city centres while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. The traffic congestion in urban areas continues to be a con...
by altinbek11
Fri Mar 03, 2017 5:55 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing task 2 and give some feedback. I will be profoundly grateful for you support.
Replies: 1
Views: 1217

Please assess my writing task 2 and give some feedback. I will be profoundly grateful for you support.

Some people think governments should take measures regarding the healthy lifestyle of individuals. Others think it must be managed by individuals. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. It is thought by some people that the government needs to promote the healthy lifestyle of its residents. Howe...
by altinbek11
Sun Feb 26, 2017 1:05 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 2 please assess this essay
Replies: 2
Views: 2803

Re: Writing Task 2 please assess this essay

Thank you so much I will try my best
by altinbek11
Sat Feb 25, 2017 4:01 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 2 please assess this essay
Replies: 2
Views: 2803

Writing Task 2 please assess this essay

Schools are spending more time teaching traditional subjects such as history. Some people think they should rather spend more time in teaching skills that can help students find a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Nowadays, school curriculums consist of much more conventional lessons suc...
by altinbek11
Wed Feb 15, 2017 2:39 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing task 2 and give some feedback. I will be profoundly grateful for you support.
Replies: 1
Views: 1148

Please assess my writing task 2 and give some feedback. I will be profoundly grateful for you support.

In some country young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard on their studies. What do you think are the cause of this? What solutions can you suggest? It is evident that youngsters have little time to spend on their personal life due to the academic work, which...
by altinbek11
Tue Feb 07, 2017 4:00 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Repost your essays if you want me to check them
Replies: 5
Views: 2692

Re: Repost your essays if you want me to check them

Some people believe that university education should only be offered to those who can pay for their own courses and the government should not be expected to fund higher education. What extent do you agree? State spending on a higher education nationwide continues to be a controversial debate. It is...
by altinbek11
Tue Feb 07, 2017 3:27 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing task 2 and give some feedback. I will be profoundly grateful for you support.
Replies: 1
Views: 1117

Please assess my writing task 2 and give some feedback. I will be profoundly grateful for you support.

It is better to save money than to spend it. How far do you agree or disagree? Is saving more important than spending in today’s world? In the fast-changing world, people struggle to manage their income and expenditure. Some prefer to save money for future while others tend to spend only on everyday...
by altinbek11
Mon Feb 06, 2017 6:43 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas, whether words, pictures, music or film,
Replies: 1
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Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas, whether words, pictures, music or film,

It is a controversial topic that gifted artists have to be given the opportunity to exhibit their opinion regardless of what their methods are. I personally believe that there should be a mechanism to control and assess the performance of artists, and this essay will discuss two main reasons why art...
by altinbek11
Mon Feb 06, 2017 6:35 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing task 2 and give some feedback. I will be profoundly grateful for you support.
Replies: 2
Views: 2571

Please assess my writing task 2 and give some feedback. I will be profoundly grateful for you support.

We should introduce laws to make businesses and state services employ equal numbers of male and female workers in every department or area of the company. How far do you support this idea? Give reasons for your answer, and support your essay with ideas and examples from your own experience. The issu...
by altinbek11
Mon Feb 06, 2017 6:23 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Tourism is always a force for good which enables people of different countries to understand each other. To what extent
Replies: 1
Views: 5877

Tourism is always a force for good which enables people of different countries to understand each other. To what extent

Tourism has become one of the main benefits of globalisation and democracy as well as international contracts. However, some feel that tourism attacks the national identity and have social, economic and ecological drawbacks, others believe that it build a bond of friendship between nations. I believ...