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by cnsfriends143
Mon Mar 20, 2017 8:07 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: WT1 maps. I deeply need your comments. Thanks for feedback.
Replies: 1
Views: 1183

WT1 maps. I deeply need your comments. Thanks for feedback.

The map illustrates the various modifications in a town in America from 1948 to 2010. Over the period, some buildings were demolished to make way for new infrastructures. Also, some establishments were redeveloped and relocated to a different area while some remained the same. The four factories loc...
by cnsfriends143
Mon Mar 20, 2017 6:12 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: TASK 1. Process. Thank you for any feedback.
Replies: 0
Views: 1797

TASK 1. Process. Thank you for any feedback.

The illustrations depict the various stages in canning a fruit. Fruit canning is a man-made linear process that starts with the fruit being hand-picked from a source and ends with the delivery of the final output. There are 14 different stages that includes preparing the ingredients prior to manufac...
by cnsfriends143
Thu Mar 02, 2017 12:28 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 1. Line graph.
Replies: 2
Views: 1364

Re: Writing task 1. Line graph.

Thanks David. I deeply appreciate your feedback
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by cnsfriends143
Sun Feb 26, 2017 5:07 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 1. Line graph.
Replies: 2
Views: 1364

Writing task 1. Line graph.

The line graph depicts data from a report collected in 2008 about energy consumption in the United States since 1980 with predictions until 2030. It is noticeable that fossil fuel usage mainly increased over the years and was expected to do so until 2030 except for natural gas. Also, radioactive and...
by cnsfriends143
Wed Feb 01, 2017 11:01 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 1
Replies: 1
Views: 1595

Writing Task 1

Line graph below. The line graph depicts data with regard to the mean temperatures in a month for three cities in Africa - Cairo, Cape Town, and Mombasa. The temperature is expressed in degrees Fahrenheit. It is substantially noticeable that Mombasa, Kenya has almost the same temperature range throu...
by cnsfriends143
Mon Jan 09, 2017 6:29 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my essay. I desperately need feedback. Thanks
Replies: 2
Views: 1334

Please evaluate my essay. I desperately need feedback. Thanks

Question: Attendance is regularly checked in many colleges and universities. But some state universities do not consider attendance as important arguing that passing the course is more important. Which do you think is better? Frequently checking the attendance has mostly been a part of numerous coll...