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by sweetypatel
Fri Sep 30, 2016 12:48 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 : Big Companies attracts people: pros and cons
Replies: 4
Views: 4147

Re: Task 2 : Big Companies attracts people: pros and cons

Thanks David for your suggestions. First paragraph answers first question so I wrote unnecessary spending is one of the problems. Usage of facebook and instagram is step to be taken by local business not the government. As question is in general about the measures to be taken not by only government....
by sweetypatel
Fri Sep 30, 2016 12:42 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS Essay on Supermalls causes death of local business and community
Replies: 4
Views: 4125

Re: IELTS Essay on Supermalls causes death of local business and community

Thanks David for your suggestion.

In india, we consider supermalls and supermarkets. They are both same for us.
And local markets are not as much clean as malls here in India.
All in all, I wrote this essay assuming my home-town.

:)
by sweetypatel
Fri Sep 30, 2016 12:38 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Understanding Task Response
Replies: 2
Views: 4291

Re: Understanding Task Response

Thanks David.

:)
by sweetypatel
Fri Sep 30, 2016 12:37 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2 for Advantages of Uniforms for company and employee
Replies: 2
Views: 4663

Writing task 2 for Advantages of Uniforms for company and employee

Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. What are the advantages for a company of having a uniform? Are there any benefits of having a uniform for the staff? Nowadays, many organizations compel their employees to wear uniform during their duty hours. This trend h...
by sweetypatel
Fri Sep 30, 2016 6:23 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly Evaluate my Task 2
Replies: 5
Views: 1300

Re: Kindly Evaluate my Task 2

Hi David,

I am aiming for 6 band in IELTS - General Test.
My test date is 3rd November 2016.
by sweetypatel
Tue Sep 27, 2016 12:15 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 : Big Companies attracts people: pros and cons
Replies: 4
Views: 4147

Task 2 : Big Companies attracts people: pros and cons

Essay topic: Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products? Big companies, nowadays, have been using their huge funds over adve...
by sweetypatel
Mon Sep 26, 2016 10:29 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS Essay on Supermalls causes death of local business and community
Replies: 4
Views: 4125

IELTS Essay on Supermalls causes death of local business and community

Essay Topic:Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Nowadays, superma...
by sweetypatel
Mon Sep 26, 2016 7:37 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Understanding Task Response
Replies: 2
Views: 4291

Understanding Task Response

Essay Topic: "Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities." Task response is one of the criteria for an e...
by sweetypatel
Mon Sep 26, 2016 4:33 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly Evaluate my Task 2 Essay or Spending on arts
Replies: 4
Views: 1062

Re: Kindly Evaluate my Task 2 Essay or Spending on arts

Thanks, David.IELTS.Examiner

Would you please tell me an approximate band I could get, please?
by sweetypatel
Mon Sep 26, 2016 4:32 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly Evaluate my Task 2 Essay or Spending on arts
Replies: 4
Views: 1062

Re: Kindly Evaluate my Task 2 Essay or Spending on arts

Thanks, Flick.

Would you please tell me an approximate band I could get, please?
by sweetypatel
Fri Sep 23, 2016 4:54 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly Evaluate my Task 2
Replies: 5
Views: 1300

Re: Kindly Evaluate my Task 2

Thanks, David , for your suggestions.

I would be grateful if you can give me an approximate band for this essay. I am not a native speaker but I have learnt English from my childhood.
by sweetypatel
Mon Sep 19, 2016 1:28 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly Evaluate my Task 2 Essay or Spending on arts
Replies: 4
Views: 1062

Kindly Evaluate my Task 2 Essay or Spending on arts

Spending money on a particular sector is a crucial decision to be taken by the government which could significantly affect the society. Some believe that nowadays the government is investing the fund in the art which is nothing but wastage of valuable resources which if invested in other sectors, co...
by sweetypatel
Mon Sep 19, 2016 8:47 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly Evaluate my Task 2
Replies: 5
Views: 1300

Kindly Evaluate my Task 2

Topic: 'Telecommuting' refers to workers doing their jobs from home for part of each week and communicating with their office using computer technology. Telecommuting is growing in many countries and is expected to be common for most office workers in the coming decades. How do you think society wil...