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by ysaddiq
Sat Nov 05, 2016 11:38 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing task 2
Replies: 2
Views: 2860

Please assess my writing task 2

Most pollution, especially air and water pollution, is caused by industry. if we want to protect the environment we should make factories and forms of industry pay for all the pollution they cause. that is the only way to make sure that the owners will make a serious effort to reduce the pollution t...
by ysaddiq
Wed Nov 02, 2016 8:33 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Why exams must be abolished. Task 2 +7
Replies: 2
Views: 3845

Why exams must be abolished. Task 2 +7

Most education systems rely on examination to encourage children to study, but as a result children suffer from too much stress and they never learn to be creative. Therefore examinations should be abolished. do you agree? Examination is claimed that it is an effective feature to help children to st...
by ysaddiq
Sat Oct 29, 2016 1:00 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Internet and inequalities Task 2 7+
Replies: 2
Views: 4524

Internet and inequalities Task 2 7+

The Internet has provided great benefits, but at the same time, it has also created new problems and inequalities. it possible to control some of these problems? Today, the Internet is the most important and tremendously the most popular technology in the world. However, similar to any revolutionary...
by ysaddiq
Thu Oct 27, 2016 8:32 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my task 2 7+
Replies: 4
Views: 1492

Re: Please evaluate my task 2 7+

Thanks Flick for the correction, you are amazing! Many modern children spend a great deal of time sitting in front of television or computer screen.This is extremely harmful to their development. Therefore parents should strictly limit the time children spend in this way. Discuss the statement. Tele...
by ysaddiq
Thu Oct 27, 2016 8:30 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my task 2 7+
Replies: 4
Views: 1492

Re: Please evaluate my task 2 7+

Thank you Mr. David for your valuable feedback. Which IELTS score band do you think this essay fall in? Hello! I like this question, because it simply asks you to discuss the statement, which consists of 3 parts; 1. Many modern children spend a great deal of time sitting in front of television or co...
by ysaddiq
Sun Oct 23, 2016 8:16 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 2 8+
Replies: 4
Views: 4300

Re: Writing Task 2 8+

Thank you Flick for the correction.
by ysaddiq
Wed Oct 19, 2016 8:12 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my task 2 7+
Replies: 4
Views: 1492

Please evaluate my task 2 7+

Many modern children spend a great deal of time sitting in front of television or computer screen.This is extremely harmful to their development. Therefore parents should strictly limit the time children spend in this way. Discuss the statement. Television and computer games are the most demanding e...
by ysaddiq
Mon Oct 17, 2016 10:17 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly Evaluate my Task 2
Replies: 3
Views: 764

Re: Kindly Evaluate my Task 2

Hello! This essay is quite good. The ideas are fine, but they are not well-developed. We can see that the main paragraphs are the same length as the introduction and conclusion. There are grammatical errors, but they do not change meaning. Vocabulary is good and you have included some good adverbs ...
by ysaddiq
Mon Oct 17, 2016 10:10 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 2 8+
Replies: 4
Views: 4300

Re: Writing Task 2 8+

Hello! The first main paragraph is a little unclear to me. The word 'buddies' is either incorrect or too informal. However, the second main paragraph introduces a very good example and is clearly written. You use a wide range of connectives well and the essay has clear organisation. Vocabulary is g...
by ysaddiq
Thu Oct 13, 2016 9:12 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 2 8+
Replies: 4
Views: 4300

Writing Task 2 8+

We live in a technological age. however, technology cannot solve the worlds problems. therefore some people argue that we need to place less emphasis on technological solutions and more on on other values. Discuss the statement. Technology has improved people’s lives in various ways. However the wo...
by ysaddiq
Tue Oct 11, 2016 9:03 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly Evaluate my Task 2
Replies: 3
Views: 764

Kindly Evaluate my Task 2

The government should pay to the parents of very young children, so that one of them can stay at home and look after their children. What do you think are the pros and cons of this policy? Justify your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Most parents with ...
by ysaddiq
Tue Aug 23, 2016 4:52 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindely, evaluate my GT writing - task 2
Replies: 1
Views: 2216

Kindely, evaluate my GT writing - task 2

Some people say that teenagers should work part-time and earn money. This way they will learn basic lessons about work and become more disciplined. Others argue that teenagers shouldn't sacrifice their rest and after-school activities to work. Discuss both views and give your opinion. --------------...
by ysaddiq
Mon Aug 22, 2016 3:48 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindely, evaluate my GT writing - task 2
Replies: 2
Views: 697

Re: Kindely, evaluate my GT writing - task 2

Hello! Very often, candidates only look at an issue (or aspect of an issue) from one viewpoint. Do all university students pay their own fees? Parents? Scholarships? In countries where students pay, there isn't generally a lack of good employees, e.g. USA, UK. If the universities have to wait until...
by ysaddiq
Sun Aug 21, 2016 8:28 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindely, evaluate my GT writing - task 2
Replies: 2
Views: 697

Kindely, evaluate my GT writing - task 2

Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Recently, most students in developed countries work to pay tuition of their university fees. Working wh...
by ysaddiq
Sun Aug 21, 2016 8:26 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindely, evaluate my GT writing - task 2
Replies: 1
Views: 648

Kindely, evaluate my GT writing - task 2

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion? Nowadays, media contents and electronic games are in major increase and producers/cre...
by ysaddiq
Sun Aug 21, 2016 8:24 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindely, evaluate my GT writing - task 2
Replies: 0
Views: 1981

Kindely, evaluate my GT writing - task 2

Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest? Nowadays, our environment faces a huge extinction of unique and different kinds of species due t...
by ysaddiq
Sun Aug 21, 2016 8:22 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindely, evaluate my GT writing - task 2
Replies: 0
Views: 1601

Kindely, evaluate my GT writing - task 2

Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What measures can be taken to overcome this epidemic? Nowadays, a lot of people are following unhealthy diet habits that leads to overweight. Today we have more overweight individuals than ever be...
by ysaddiq
Sun Aug 21, 2016 8:09 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Hello! I am Yahya
Replies: 1
Views: 4185

Hello! I am Yahya

Hello There,

i am Yahya from Somali but live in Egypt.
I am preparing for my second IELTS and my targeting to score band 8.
i am looking for a friend to practice speaking in various topics and to review my writings.

Thank You,
Yahya