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by wannabe
Fri Jul 08, 2016 7:24 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: GT Task 2. Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.
Replies: 4
Views: 4965

Re: GT Task 2. Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.

Looks like a good essay to me. The only suggestion would be to try replacing the overused word "toys" with some more specific toys types such us LEGO, Action figures, Puzzles, Model cars, Dolls.
by wannabe
Thu Jul 07, 2016 9:45 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please review my GT task 2
Replies: 5
Views: 1466

Re: please review my GT task 2

I think instead of "Some people, ... However" in introduction paragraph, it's better to use something like "While some people think..., there are quite a few opponents to this idea.". It makes the sentence easier to read and also eliminates repetition of "some people". ...
by wannabe
Thu Jul 07, 2016 9:04 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: GT Task 1 Letter of complaint
Replies: 1
Views: 4062

GT Task 1 Letter of complaint

You recently made reservations for dinner at a very famous and expensive restaurant in town. However, the meal and the service were terrible. The restaurant manager was not available to solve the problem, so you left without a resolution. Write an email to the restaurant's manager in about 150-200 ...
by wannabe
Thu Jul 07, 2016 8:57 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: GT Task 1 - Volunteer work
Replies: 2
Views: 5458

Re: GT Task 1 - Volunteer work

It looks really good in terms of vocabulary and task achievement, however, I feel that the weakest point of the letter would be cohesion or usage of appropriate linking words. As I can see, most of the sentences start with "I", which sounds a bit mechanical: I did this, I did that... Thoug...
by wannabe
Wed Jun 22, 2016 9:24 pm
Forum: Post your success story
Topic: Some people want to be a 9er,others 8er.All I want is to be a 7er in all areas!
Replies: 2
Views: 7884

Re: Some people want to be a 9er,others 8er.All I want is to be a 7er in all areas!

Feel you, just do more practicing and try to get some help from qualified teachers.
by wannabe
Wed Jun 22, 2016 9:20 pm
Forum: Post your success story
Topic: Got 8 band disappointed
Replies: 2
Views: 7570

Re: Got 8 band disappointed

That's actually a good point, I also find myself recomposing a sentence quite often when I'm typing, and when I do writing it takes way more time to erase and write a sentence again following the typing habit. Also, when I see a clear type font it's easier to notice any mistake. I'd suggest consider...
by wannabe
Fri Jun 17, 2016 2:58 am
Forum: IELTS preparation resources
Topic: Interactive Online resources
Replies: 5
Views: 10266

Re: Interactive Online resources

Hi, I'm really glad that finally somebody brought up the question of digitizing preparation for IELTS. I personally feel that it could bring totally different experience to the table, and reach many students who are now struggling with getting access to conventional IELTS prep courses. ielts.test.ef...