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by rairaichan0323
Wed Sep 17, 2014 2:36 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls grade it - expel students or not- discussion
Replies: 0
Views: 299

pls grade it - expel students or not- discussion

In many countries, students must leave school because of their poor behaviours. Some people think it is a good idea, while others argue that there are other ways to solve this problem. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Discipline is very significant all people. In many nations, some disrupt...
by rairaichan0323
Fri Sep 12, 2014 2:54 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pls grade it - entertainers are paid too much $-argument
Replies: 2
Views: 1193

Pls grade it - entertainers are paid too much $-argument

Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop, musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of jobs should be highly paid? In a modern city, majority of celebrities could get higher salaries than others, especially entertainers. While so...
by rairaichan0323
Thu Sep 11, 2014 11:38 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pls help - teenager do unpaid jobs - argument
Replies: 2
Views: 667

Re: Pls help - teenager do unpaid jobs - argument

thank you Johnson,

I just try to use various vocabularies to write my essay in order to reply same word all the time.
what do u think of my essay? can u grade it for me? thank you
by rairaichan0323
Thu Sep 11, 2014 9:43 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls grade it - kids are unhealthy- report
Replies: 2
Views: 861

Re: pls grade it - kids are unhealthy- report

thank you Durai,

thanks for ur valuable comment. also if u have a time , could you pls keep on eyes of my message and give me some comments. thanks a lot!!
by rairaichan0323
Thu Sep 11, 2014 3:07 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pls help - teenager do unpaid jobs - argument
Replies: 2
Views: 667

Pls help - teenager do unpaid jobs - argument

Teenagers prefer to do the unpaid jobs in the community nowadays. This behavior is beneficial to the community as well as to the teenagers themselves. Do you agree or disagree? In the modern society, the majority of institutions motivates pupils to conduct voluntary activities in their leisure time...
by rairaichan0323
Wed Sep 10, 2014 3:06 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls grade it - kids are unhealthy- report
Replies: 2
Views: 861

pls grade it - kids are unhealthy- report

Nowadays, many children are not as fit and healthy as children used to be in the past. What are the causes? How could it be solved? In this age of change, the human society is progressing rapidly on various fronts. Yet, at the same time, many problems have arisen, a serious one of them is youngster...
by rairaichan0323
Wed Sep 10, 2014 1:56 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
Replies: 30
Views: 9229

Re: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time

Flick would u pls help? thanks a lot
by rairaichan0323
Mon Sep 08, 2014 3:05 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
Replies: 30
Views: 9229

Re: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time

Some people think the advertisement on TV are useless while others think they are valuable. Discuss both views and giver your opinion. In a modern city, adverts are an indispensable of each individual life. People are easy to receive any new information through ads. While some would argue that adve...
by rairaichan0323
Mon Sep 08, 2014 4:42 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls grade the essay - ads on TV are useless -discussion
Replies: 1
Views: 786

pls grade the essay - ads on TV are useless -discussion

Some people think the advertisement on TV are useless while others think they are valuable. Discuss both views and giver your opinion. In a modern city, adverts are an indispensable of each individual life. People are easy to receive any new information through ads. While some would argue that adve...
by rairaichan0323
Mon Sep 08, 2014 12:52 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
Replies: 30
Views: 9229

Re: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time

Flick, could you pls help me to check for it? thank you We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals and crime detection. What things they will be used for in the future. Is this dependence on computer a good thing or should we be more auspicious of their...
by rairaichan0323
Sat Sep 06, 2014 4:14 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls give comments- depend on computer-argument
Replies: 0
Views: 309

pls give comments- depend on computer-argument

We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals and crime detection. What things they will be used for in the future. Is this dependence on computer a good thing or should we be more auspicious of their benefits? In a contemporary society, a computer is play...
by rairaichan0323
Fri Sep 05, 2014 9:59 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: help review it - smoking and freedom-argument
Replies: 2
Views: 447

Re: help review it - smoking and freedom-argument

thank you phoebejanechua !!
by rairaichan0323
Fri Sep 05, 2014 9:56 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: exam in 2 days! pls help-student health
Replies: 4
Views: 709

Re: exam in 2 days! pls help-student health

thank you Flick!!
by rairaichan0323
Thu Sep 04, 2014 3:56 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: help review it - smoking and freedom-argument
Replies: 2
Views: 447

help review it - smoking and freedom-argument

Many businesses now ban smoking from all offices and governments prohibit it in all public places. This is a good idea but it has restricted our freedom. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In the contemporary society, smoking is identified as unhealthy behavior. Most of the companies in the m...
by rairaichan0323
Thu Sep 04, 2014 2:18 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: exam in 2 days! pls help-student health
Replies: 4
Views: 709

Re: exam in 2 days! pls help-student health

Flick, could you please help me to check my essay? thank you!! More and more companies are allowing employees to work from home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development. In the present age, the use of technology is increasing rapidly. There are more companies allowing their workers t...
by rairaichan0323
Thu Sep 04, 2014 12:33 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls help - distant working
Replies: 1
Views: 455

Re: pls help - distant working

anyone pls give me some comment, thank you
by rairaichan0323
Wed Sep 03, 2014 10:05 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls help - distant working
Replies: 1
Views: 455

pls help - distant working

More and more companies are allowing employees to work from home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development. In the present age, the use of technology is increasing rapidly. There are more companies allowing their workers to conduct their jobs at home. It is agreed that this trend has...
by rairaichan0323
Sat May 10, 2014 2:24 pm
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: General training writing May 10th
Replies: 10
Views: 3927

Re: General training writing May 10th

How about if i suggested that employer to set flexible working hours for their employees in order to reduce the traffic congestion. Is it ok? Or it looks like off the topic?
by rairaichan0323
Sat May 10, 2014 1:34 pm
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: General training writing May 10th
Replies: 10
Views: 3927

Re: General training writing May 10th

Hi allzen,

What did u write down for the solutions?

Thank you
by rairaichan0323
Fri May 09, 2014 4:14 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: task2- teenagers prefer to do unpaid jobs
Replies: 0
Views: 451

task2- teenagers prefer to do unpaid jobs

Teenagers prefer to do the unpaid jobs in the community nowadays. This behavior is beneficial to the community as well as to the teenagers themselves. Do you agree or disagree? In the present age, it seems that my adolescents tend to perform voluntary works. Some people opine that it is advantageous...
by rairaichan0323
Thu May 08, 2014 3:26 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: exam in 2 days! pls help-student health
Replies: 4
Views: 709

exam in 2 days! pls help-student health

Nowadays, many children are not as fit and healthy as children used to be in the past. What are the causes? How could it be solved? In the contemporary society, the lifestyle of today’s teenagers is very different if comparing to those of previous generations. Some people argue that the children are...
by rairaichan0323
Thu May 08, 2014 2:51 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls evaluate my essay!! Task 2 - disruptive students
Replies: 2
Views: 2987

pls evaluate my essay!! Task 2 - disruptive students

In many countries, students must leave school because of their poor behaviours. Some people think it is a good idea, while others argue that there are other ways to solve this problem. Discuss both views and give your opinion. In some nations, disruptive students are expelled from an institution due...
by rairaichan0323
Wed May 07, 2014 5:31 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
Replies: 30
Views: 9229

i need your help-task 2- children too much free time

Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time? A proper method of managing free time is playing a key role in student's success. Some people opine that pupils shou...
by rairaichan0323
Wed May 07, 2014 2:44 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls help - task2-shopping is becoming a free-time activity
Replies: 0
Views: 4275

pls help - task2-shopping is becoming a free-time activity

In many places shopping is becoming a free-time activity, replacing the traditional hobbies of the past. Discuss the reasons for this development. Is this development positive or negative? In the present age, it seems that more people tend to do shopping as a kind of hobby instead of the conventiona...