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by Herwinnnn
Mon Mar 14, 2016 3:32 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please evaluate my TASK 2
Replies: 2
Views: 1103

Re: please evaluate my TASK 2

This is my correction for your essay : Big letters = adding or changing the words Bracket = addition or removal of words Planet earth is the only natural habitat for ()humans to live. With well oxygenated atmosphere and the presence of the ozone layer and water, earth () has all the favourable condi...
by Herwinnnn
Tue Jan 26, 2016 12:37 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess this essay, okay, please ?
Replies: 1
Views: 542

Please assess this essay, okay, please ?

Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. --------------------------------------------------------------------...
by Herwinnnn
Wed Jan 20, 2016 8:48 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: (PLEASE HELP - Having test 2 DAYS later) Should visitors follow the local customs of other country?
Replies: 0
Views: 1583

(PLEASE HELP - Having test 2 DAYS later) Should visitors follow the local customs of other country?

Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. -------------------------------------------------------------------...
by Herwinnnn
Sat Jan 16, 2016 1:35 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: (PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS - Band 7 achievable?) Talented and talent that can be taught. (Discussion)
Replies: 1
Views: 558

(PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS - Band 7 achievable?) Talented and talent that can be taught. (Discussion)

it is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. ---------------...
by Herwinnnn
Fri Jan 15, 2016 11:32 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: (PLEASE KINDLY ACCESS - Band 7 achievable?) Museums should be free of charge? (Advantage vs Disadvantage)
Replies: 1
Views: 718

(PLEASE KINDLY ACCESS - Band 7 achievable?) Museums should be free of charge? (Advantage vs Disadvantage)

Many musems charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantage? ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- There are plethora of mu...
by Herwinnnn
Thu Jan 14, 2016 6:59 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: (PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS - Band 7 achievable?) Countries are becoming more similar. (Positive or Negative)
Replies: 1
Views: 9134

(PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS - Band 7 achievable?) Countries are becoming more similar. (Positive or Negative)

Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- In modern era, countries a...
by Herwinnnn
Wed Jan 13, 2016 11:30 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: (PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS) Essay - Life in prison is a better punishment for murderers? (Agree or Disagree)
Replies: 2
Views: 831

Re: (PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS) Essay - Life in prison is a better punishment for murderers? (Agree or Disagree)

Thank you David !!! Appreciate your effort for helping for providing feedbacks ! May God bless you!
by Herwinnnn
Mon Jan 11, 2016 7:37 am
Forum: Post your success story
Topic: My dream just got fulfilled!!!!
Replies: 3
Views: 7577

Re: My dream just got fulfilled!!!!

That is nice to hear.Congratulations !
by Herwinnnn
Mon Jan 11, 2016 7:24 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: (PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS) Essay - Life in prison is a better punishment for murderers? (Agree or Disagree)
Replies: 2
Views: 831

(PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS) Essay - Life in prison is a better punishment for murderers? (Agree or Disagree)

By Punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------...
by Herwinnnn
Fri Jan 08, 2016 1:46 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Question from British Council - Highly qualified graduates without employment
Replies: 1
Views: 1732

Question from British Council - Highly qualified graduates without employment

Please review my essay, examiner and friends ! Thank you! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Essay title : In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What fa...
by Herwinnnn
Fri Jan 08, 2016 3:23 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hello examiners and friends, could you please give feedback to my essay!
Replies: 2
Views: 623

Re: Hello examiners and friends, could you please give feedback to my essay!

Dear Examiner David,

Thank you very much for your kind feedback. It it very encouraging to me as a self-study ielts test taker. Alright, I'll keep in mind for your feedback(be more cautious) ! :D :D
by Herwinnnn
Fri Jan 08, 2016 3:15 am
Forum: IELTS preparation resources
Topic: An original mock Academic IELTS reading exam
Replies: 4
Views: 11111

Re: An original mock Academic IELTS reading exam

Dear Ryan,

To me, this mock test 1 is tough as I only got 23(lowest of band 6) scores, especially passage two I almost got every wrong questions. :cry:
Any suggestion for improvement though ? :D
by Herwinnnn
Tue Jan 05, 2016 12:33 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hello examiners and friends, could you please give feedback to my essay!
Replies: 2
Views: 623

Hello examiners and friends, could you please give feedback to my essay!

Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------...