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by chang
Thu Mar 03, 2016 3:26 pm
Forum: Post your success story
Topic: Overall score of 8.5
Replies: 3
Views: 8655

Overall score of 8.5

My scores are L-9.0 R-9.0 W-8.0 S-8.5 It has been a fortunate coincidence to find exemplary tutorial videos by Ryan freely available online and this website wherein I could analyze my proficiency in English. This was my first attempt and I've nearly achieved what I targeted. Do let me know if anyone...
by chang
Sat Dec 19, 2015 5:26 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing essay Can you rate it either 5,6,7 ,etc... ? Thank you
Replies: 4
Views: 874

Re: Please assess my writing essay Can you rate it either 5,6,7 ,etc... ? Thank you

dear David,

I am a little confused if "colleague" can be used in this context. I know that colleague can also mean partner, however, I was always under the impression that it is used in context to working partners. Kindly do clarify. thanks in advance.
by chang
Thu Dec 17, 2015 12:13 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please rate my piece of writing
Replies: 2
Views: 533

Re: Please rate my piece of writing

Dear Abbas I can't really rate your essay however, I am suggesting a few points to improvise. Although a group of people reckon that teenagers are far more happier than adults, other group of people have a different say about this. instead of repeating the same phrase, we can have "the other se...
by chang
Wed Dec 16, 2015 12:27 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: require critical comments and a possible IELTS score. I am aiming at a band 9 in writing. where do I currently stand?
Replies: 9
Views: 2220

Re: require critical comments and a possible IELTS score. I am aiming at a band 9 in writing. where do I currently stand

thank you Cliff for the analysis. I was writing essays regularly however had no clue whether I was improving or not or whether it was the right way of writing. I will take care in future with my words. is it compulsory to state which side of the argument I am supporting in the introduction itself? I...
by chang
Tue Dec 15, 2015 11:39 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task2-discussion- giving homework
Replies: 1
Views: 533

Re: Task2-discussion- giving homework

In the modern society, students not only have to attend school, they also be required to do their exercises after institution. students were required to do homework even in olden times, so "modern society" is inappropriate. moreover even though institution would be a synonym for school, i...
by chang
Tue Dec 15, 2015 10:54 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: require critical comments and a possible IELTS score. I am aiming at a band 9 in writing. where do I currently stand?
Replies: 9
Views: 2220

Re: require critical comments and a possible IELTS score. I am aiming at a band 9 in writing. where do I currently stand

i really have no idea what's the best approach. i think this way i get to write better essays and my mind will start getting accustomed to the pattern of writing and drawing out those vocabulary skills as a habit which will automatically cut down time. dunno whether it will work but its worth a shot.
by chang
Mon Dec 14, 2015 6:17 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: require critical comments and a possible IELTS score. I am aiming at a band 9 in writing. where do I currently stand?
Replies: 9
Views: 2220

Re: require critical comments and a possible IELTS score. I am aiming at a band 9 in writing. where do I currently stand

I am taking the test on 18th feb, 2016. It's about two weeks since I am practicing. I need a minimum band score of only 6, however since I am applying for Canadian PR, the higher I score on my IELTS the higher is my CRS score. So I am aiming for a band of 8.5-9.0 Moreover, its been about twenty year...
by chang
Sun Dec 13, 2015 5:16 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Topic on influence of genes versus developmental experiences on personality
Replies: 2
Views: 862

Re: Topic on influence of genes versus developmental experiences on personality

thankyou Sebastain! that really was an indepth analysis of my essay and I will ensure to pay attention to the minute details in my next essay.
However, I am still clueless of what my band score is. I wish someone could tell me where I currently stand :roll:
by chang
Sun Dec 13, 2015 4:33 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: require critical comments and a possible IELTS score. I am aiming at a band 9 in writing. where do I currently stand?
Replies: 9
Views: 2220

Re: require critical comments and a possible IELTS score. I am aiming at a band 9 in writing. where do I currently stand

Oh wow! they are glaring errors I didn't realize. I shall pay careful attention to my singular/plural status henceforth. I really appreciate your comments because by myself I realized I wasn't making any improvements at all.
by chang
Sun Dec 13, 2015 9:39 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Applying for Canadian PR
Replies: 3
Views: 2638

Re: Applying for Canadian PR

My IELTS is scheduled for 18th feb, 2016. so far I have been practicing from the Cambridge books (completed books 1, 3 and 5) and my scores for listening range between 8-9 (9 only about 5 times). for reading its more arnd 7.5-8.0 (9 only a couple of times). I know if i cantinue to practice more and ...
by chang
Sat Dec 12, 2015 8:44 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Topic on influence of genes versus developmental experiences on personality
Replies: 2
Views: 862

Topic on influence of genes versus developmental experiences on personality

I have just started IELTS preparation about two weeks ago and I sincerely need someone to critically assess my writing and give me a possible band score as I have no idea where I stand and how an IELTS essay is actually written. Any input will be appreciated. Cambridge Practice Tests for IELTS 5 – T...
by chang
Thu Dec 10, 2015 3:24 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my written work.
Replies: 2
Views: 553

Re: Please assess my written work.

These are just a few of my suggestions. I, myself am currently practicing for my IELTS. Please accept my comments positively. it is my personal opinion that your essay maybe in the band range of 5.0-5.5. however, I'm just learning myself so I can be wrong. the blue replaces the red. Nowadays ,people...
by chang
Wed Dec 09, 2015 9:42 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Applying for Canadian PR
Replies: 3
Views: 2638

Applying for Canadian PR

Hello everybody! I am Chun Mei Chang and I live in Mumbai, India. I am practicing for my IELTS in feb, 2016. I am applying for a Canadian PR and since the only CRA scores I can improve immediately is the scores for my IELTS, I am aiming to score a 9 in every module. I understand its a humongous task...
by chang
Wed Dec 09, 2015 5:35 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: require critical comments and a possible IELTS score. I am aiming at a band 9 in writing. where do I currently stand?
Replies: 9
Views: 2220

require critical comments and a possible IELTS score. I am aiming at a band 9 in writing. where do I currently stand?

Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves? The world economy is a complex juxtaposition of developed nations w...