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by abbasazarmehrput
Thu May 19, 2016 7:04 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please let me what would be my mark in the real IELTS exam setting
Replies: 1
Views: 776

Please let me what would be my mark in the real IELTS exam setting

The internet has made it feasible for internet users to listen to music or read newspapers for free. Is this a positive or negative development? Nowadays, the internet has revolutionised the lifestyle of people. One of its main contributions is that online users could either listen to their favourit...
by abbasazarmehrput
Sat May 14, 2016 5:39 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Dear David, please answer my enquiry as soon as possible
Replies: 0
Views: 2097

Dear David, please answer my enquiry as soon as possible

Dear David, I was wondering if you could possibly tell me whether I should go for enquiry on result or not. My IELTS result is as follows: Listening 8 Reading 8 Writing 6.5 Speaking 8. I need 7 in each skill. I wrote the second portion of writing exam like this: The internet has made it feasible for...
by abbasazarmehrput
Sat Apr 09, 2016 8:12 pm
Forum: Post your speaking
Topic: Please critique this recorded file
Replies: 1
Views: 6171

Please critique this recorded file

Describe an old person you admire

who this person is

how long have you known him/her

what qualities he/she have

and say why you admire him/her
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by abbasazarmehrput
Fri Mar 04, 2016 4:58 pm
Forum: Post your speaking
Topic: Please critique this recorded file
Replies: 1
Views: 6275

Please critique this recorded file

Part 2 speaking

Describe someone you know who does something well.

You should say:

Who this person is

How you know this person

What they do well

And explain why you think this person is so good at doing this
by abbasazarmehrput
Fri Mar 04, 2016 10:27 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please, hash out this letter
Replies: 1
Views: 828

Please, hash out this letter

You are getting married soon. Write a letter to your friend from a different country and invite him/her to the wedding. In your letter - Describe your future wife/husband. - What will happen at the wedding? - Why do you want to invite him/her? Dear John, Hi. How have you been recently? I hope everyt...
by abbasazarmehrput
Fri Mar 04, 2016 10:19 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Dear examiners, please critique my essay which is about old and young employees
Replies: 1
Views: 682

Dear examiners, please critique my essay which is about old and young employees

Some people think that only staff who worked in a company for a long time should be promoted to higher positions. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and examples. Do you agree with this statement? Many organisations, especially those operating in information technology sector, often promote...
by abbasazarmehrput
Tue Mar 01, 2016 6:51 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please critique this essay which is about fashion industry
Replies: 2
Views: 958

Re: Please critique this essay which is about fashion industry

Dear David, First of all, thank you for commenting on my essays, and I am almost always pleased whenever I read your comments. I totally agree with you that I should not generalise in my essays, but I think it is the test of English and how we can deliver our thoughts and opinions in English. There ...
by abbasazarmehrput
Sat Feb 27, 2016 7:55 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please critique this essay which is about fashion industry
Replies: 2
Views: 958

Please critique this essay which is about fashion industry

The clothing and fashion industry have a big influence on people. Is this a good or bad thing? Nowadays, all people, especially juveniles, like to dress like their favourite actors or actresses. Although clothing and fashion industry have some positive effects on people, I personally believe that th...
by abbasazarmehrput
Sun Feb 14, 2016 7:11 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please analyse my piece of writing and mark it
Replies: 1
Views: 681

Please analyse my piece of writing and mark it

Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment? There has been a heated debate among people on which kind of accommodation suits ...
by abbasazarmehrput
Sat Feb 06, 2016 7:59 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: A writing task 1 about a restaurant
Replies: 1
Views: 1064

A writing task 1 about a restaurant

You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and the service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter Give details of your visit to the restaurant Explain the reason for the celebration Say what was good abo...
by abbasazarmehrput
Mon Feb 01, 2016 8:13 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: speaking portion of exam
Replies: 1
Views: 1597

speaking portion of exam

Could you please tell me whether we are allowed to look at the cue card after starting the two-minute long turn or not?
by abbasazarmehrput
Mon Feb 01, 2016 8:09 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: what is difference between these two type of questions?
Replies: 0
Views: 2007

what is difference between these two type of questions?

Could you please let me know the differences between these two question types " To what extent do you agree or disagree?" and " Do you agree or disagree?" ? Can I use argument structure for answering both these questions( I mean one-sided argument for both of them )? Thank you in...
by abbasazarmehrput
Sat Jan 30, 2016 8:10 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Should I go for re-check?
Replies: 3
Views: 2016

Should I go for re-check?

That is the result of my exam on the 9th of January, 2016: L 8 R 6.5 S 7 W 7. I need straight 7s. should I enquire for reading? do I have any chance to get 7 in reading?

Please help me.
by abbasazarmehrput
Tue Jan 26, 2016 8:35 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Dear David, Please look at my essay and analyse it
Replies: 3
Views: 1051

Re: RE: Re: Dear David, Please look at my essay and analyse it

Mobile phones should be banned in certain places. Agree or disagree? Nowadays, more and more sophisticated devices have been introduced to the market since industrialization commenced in the UK. One of the latest technologically advanced instruments is the cell phone. Although it has many benefits ...
by abbasazarmehrput
Sat Jan 16, 2016 6:32 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Dear David, could you please introduce an IELTS teacher teaching online
Replies: 3
Views: 1879

Re: Dear David, could you please introduce an IELTS teacher teaching online

Hi. Is it possible to tell me your skype ID please?

mine is abbas.azarmehr1

plus, could you please tell me your time zone? I live in Iran (+3:30 GMT)
by abbasazarmehrput
Thu Jan 14, 2016 7:29 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Dear David, could you please introduce an IELTS teacher teaching online
Replies: 3
Views: 1879

Dear David, could you please introduce an IELTS teacher teaching online

Dear David,

Thank you for your great contributions to this web site and all IELTS test takers.

Could you please introduce an approved online IELTS teacher to us?

Thank you in advance.

Cheers,

Abbas
by abbasazarmehrput
Fri Jan 08, 2016 9:12 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: School children are becoming far too dependent on computers. TASK 2 Please provide feedback
Replies: 7
Views: 7686

Re: School children are becoming far too dependent on computers. TASK 2 Please provide feedback

Dear David,

I was wondering if you could send them to me too.

Email address: abbas.azarmehr.put@gmail.com

Cheers,

Abbas

Sent from my GT-I9060 using Tapatalk
by abbasazarmehrput
Thu Jan 07, 2016 9:25 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please rate my last essay before taking IELTS on the 9th of January
Replies: 1
Views: 563

Please rate my last essay before taking IELTS on the 9th of January

What are the reasons of committing a crime in the world? How could this be resolved? Nowadays, the crime rate has increased dramatically in the world. It is believed that poverty and playing violent games are main reasons behind committing a crime. Some solutions in order to tackle these challenges ...
by abbasazarmehrput
Tue Jan 05, 2016 2:09 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my essay
Replies: 3
Views: 861

Re: Please assess my essay

Dear David,

Thank you for your helpful comments. I was wondering if you could tell me whether I could get 7 with this style of writing.

Please help me because my exam will be on the 9 th of January.

Cheers,

Abbas
by abbasazarmehrput
Sat Jan 02, 2016 10:14 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my essay
Replies: 1
Views: 653

Please assess my essay

Does being a celebrity bring more advantages or disadvantages? There has been a heated debate among people on whether fame brings benefits or not. Although a group of people believe that being a celebrity has many drawbacks, it is agreed that its advantages are far more than its disadvantages. This ...
by abbasazarmehrput
Sat Jan 02, 2016 10:14 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my essay
Replies: 3
Views: 861

Please assess my essay

Does being a celebrity bring more advantages or disadvantages? There has been a heated debate among people on whether fame brings benefits or not. Although a group of people believe that being a celebrity has many drawbacks, it is agreed that its advantages are far more than its disadvantages. This ...
by abbasazarmehrput
Thu Dec 31, 2015 1:10 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please analyse my piece of writing
Replies: 1
Views: 611

Please analyse my piece of writing

Writing task 2 Some people think that teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these viewpoints and give your own opinion. There has been a heated debate among sociologists and ...
by abbasazarmehrput
Thu Dec 31, 2015 1:07 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please comment on my letter
Replies: 2
Views: 649

Please comment on my letter

Writing task 1 On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter • Describe the item you lost • Explain how you lost it • Tell the insurance company what you ...
by abbasazarmehrput
Thu Dec 31, 2015 9:57 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please hash out my essay
Replies: 2
Views: 683

Please hash out my essay

Some people think that teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these viewpoints and give your own opinion. There has been a heated debate among sociologists and psychologists o...
by abbasazarmehrput
Thu Dec 31, 2015 9:29 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please let me know about my band score for this writing
Replies: 4
Views: 957

Re: please let me know about my band score for this writing

Dear David, Thank you very much indeed for commenting on all my letters and essays. I owe you a lot. I should mention that I adopted the Ryan's strategy to answer this question. In other words, I chose argument style for answering to this question. The following essay was written by Ryan, and I insp...