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by fasah
Wed Jan 04, 2017 11:36 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing task 2
Replies: 2
Views: 1024

Please assess my writing task 2

In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. What extent children have to follow rules? Children are most fragile part of society and their proper upbringing is quite challenging in this sense. it is true that in...
by fasah
Sat Dec 31, 2016 11:06 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing task 2
Replies: 2
Views: 974

Please assess my writing task 2

Some businesses prohibit smoking in any of their offices. some government have banned smoking in all public places. Agree or disagree with this course of action? Give reasons for your opinion. "Smoking is injurious to health" is one of the common phrase that is normally found printed on pa...
by fasah
Fri Dec 30, 2016 11:14 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing task 2
Replies: 2
Views: 1012

Please assess my writing task 2

In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. What extent children have to follow rules. Children are most fragile component of any society and their proper brought up is quite challenging in many domains. In many...
by fasah
Wed Nov 09, 2016 7:26 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing task 2
Replies: 2
Views: 1358

Please assess my writing task 2

Rich countries should allow jobs for skilled and knowledgeable employees who are from poor countries. Do you agree or disagree? The advertisement of various job opportunities for overseas candidates is nowadays a very common strategy used by human resources department. As a result of this, multiple ...
by fasah
Fri Nov 04, 2016 11:40 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing task 2
Replies: 2
Views: 741

Please assess my writing task 2

Some people believe that good leaders are born, whereas others the opinion that the leadership qualities could be obtained during the life.who represent the good leader qualities indeed? A leader is the demand of every nation,community, group or society.He is the only one to be looked at in the hour...
by fasah
Fri Nov 04, 2016 5:45 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing task 1.
Replies: 2
Views: 715

Please assess my writing task 1.

The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The given pie charts illustrate the data about the ages of people of Yemen...
by fasah
Wed Nov 02, 2016 8:55 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing task 1.
Replies: 2
Views: 678

Please assess my writing task 1.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant. The given line graph demonstrates the pattern of energy utili...
by fasah
Mon Oct 31, 2016 10:16 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing task 1.
Replies: 1
Views: 879

Please assess my writing task 1.

The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China.write a report for a university lecturer describing the information. The given bar chart illustrates the number of vehicles owned by people in China over the span of twelve years, ranging from 1987-1999. It can be observed clearl...
by fasah
Tue Oct 25, 2016 10:17 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing task 1.
Replies: 1
Views: 498

Please assess my writing task 1.

The graph below shows unusual water usage (in millions of cubic metres) by industries in some countries. Answer: The given bar chart demonstrates the consumption of water by several industries in some of the countries of the world. The water given to them is in the form of ground water and public su...
by fasah
Fri Oct 21, 2016 7:15 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing task 1.
Replies: 2
Views: 808

Please assess my writing task 1.

The charts below give information about travel to and from UK,and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. The given line graph illustrates the travel pattern of visitors to ...
by fasah
Wed Dec 02, 2015 5:40 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please assess my ielts writing task 2
Replies: 1
Views: 461

please assess my ielts writing task 2

Violence among young people has increased dramatically over the past 50 years. This rise moves in tandem with the growth in violent media. Thus, the conclusion can be drawn that violent media is the main cause of violence among young people. Agree or disagree. Violence is one exaggerated action that...
by fasah
Tue Dec 01, 2015 3:36 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please assess my ielts writing task 2
Replies: 1
Views: 439

please assess my ielts writing task 2

Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal of more money than people in other professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Over the last two decades, sports have potentially emerged as a profession rather...
by fasah
Sun Nov 29, 2015 1:57 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please assess my ielts writing task 1
Replies: 3
Views: 630

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by fasah
Fri Nov 27, 2015 7:27 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please assess my ielts writing task 1
Replies: 3
Views: 630

please assess my ielts writing task 1

The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 w...
by fasah
Mon Nov 23, 2015 7:05 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please assess my ielts writing task 2
Replies: 1
Views: 384

please assess my ielts writing task 2

Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the develpoment of poor nations. However, the govt. of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping poor nations ovement in heath, trade and education are essential for the development of poorer in such areas. Agree or disag...
by fasah
Mon Nov 23, 2015 6:02 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please assess my ielts writing task 2
Replies: 2
Views: 493

Re: please assess my ielts writing task 2

Hello David sir, I have just come across your post saying that never generalize the concept of your essay. Immediately after that I read my essay again and then realize it falls completely true for that. Thank you for mentioning it sir. I will definitely try to create logic in my writing. regards, f...
by fasah
Wed Nov 18, 2015 9:56 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please assess my ielts writing task 2
Replies: 2
Views: 493

please assess my ielts writing task 2

Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the needs of society in which they are sold.agree or disagree. Every year a large number of new products are designed and released by various companies throughout the world. Along with this process, the responsib...
by fasah
Wed Nov 18, 2015 5:17 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please assess my ielts writing task 2
Replies: 1
Views: 394

please assess my ielts writing task 2

Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your opinion. The most important phase contributing to the basic traits in an individua...
by fasah
Wed Nov 11, 2015 3:01 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please assess my ielts writing task 2
Replies: 3
Views: 618

Re: please assess my ielts writing task 2

hello David sir,

thank you for your response.

sir, I have a query regarding the use of personal pronouns in the essay. Most of the times it is very difficult for me to avoid myself using "them" while referring to any object. Is it perfectly ok to do in academic task?

regards,
fasah.
by fasah
Tue Nov 10, 2015 3:34 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please assess my ielts writing task 2
Replies: 3
Views: 618

please assess my ielts writing task 2

When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills & ways of life die out. It is pointless to try & keep them alive. Agree or disagree? Nowadays technology has advanced at a very rapid pace with its application sprawling in almost every domain. Infact, the sheer dependency on tec...