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by jennylfm
Fri Feb 12, 2016 6:20 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: My Task2-taking a year off
Replies: 0
Views: 1643

My Task2-taking a year off

Many students take one year off between finishing high school and going to university. Do you think its advantage outweigh its disadvantages? Currently, taking a year off for young students between completing high school and heading to college is increasingly prevalent. Although it may stimulate stu...
by jennylfm
Thu Feb 04, 2016 3:09 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please Kindly assess my task2-taking a year off
Replies: 1
Views: 646

Please Kindly assess my task2-taking a year off

Many students take one year off between finishing high school and going to university in order to travel or work. Do you think its advantages outweigh disadvantages? A growing number of students take a year off instead of heading straight to college after graduation from high school. Although it bri...
by jennylfm
Mon Feb 01, 2016 4:51 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please kindly value my task2-International tourism
Replies: 1
Views: 688

Please kindly value my task2-International tourism

In some countries, people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reason for this ? how to change their views? International tourism is a commonplace nowadays. Although it brings about not just many benefits such as broadening traveller’s horizon and promoti...
by jennylfm
Wed Jan 27, 2016 2:25 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Thanks for assessment of my task2: international tourism
Replies: 1
Views: 588

Thanks for assessment of my task2: international tourism

In some countries, people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reason for this ? how to change their views? Currently, international tourism is widely prevalent around the world. However, it is believed by some that international traveling is extremely de...
by jennylfm
Sat Jan 09, 2016 3:21 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing task2-international tourism
Replies: 2
Views: 798

Re: Please assess my writing task2-international tourism

Hello David, Thanks for your feedbacks which REALLY help. Yes, you are right. I made a huge mistake. Solutions are not linked with causes, which makes my writing very weak. And For main paragraph 1, I did not explain them very clearly. I will pay much attention to this during my following practice. ...
by jennylfm
Thu Jan 07, 2016 6:29 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing task2-unpaid work
Replies: 2
Views: 6292

Re: Please assess my writing task2-unpaid work

Hi Cliff,

Thanks for your great feedback. I did not notice that i made so many mistakes on my writing. Thanks for pointing them out. I will pay much attention to them on my following practice.

Thanks for your effort.

Thanks,
Jenny
by jennylfm
Thu Jan 07, 2016 6:19 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing task2-international tourism
Replies: 2
Views: 798

Please assess my writing task2-international tourism

In some countries, people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their countries/ what are the reasons for this? how to change their views ? Currently, international tourism is considerably prevalent in all parts of the world. However, not surprisingly, some argue that international t...
by jennylfm
Wed Jan 06, 2016 12:04 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing task2-unpaid work
Replies: 2
Views: 6292

Please assess my writing task2-unpaid work

It is suggested that all the young adults should undertake a period of unpaid work helping people in the community. does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the community and the young people? It has been suggested by some that all of young people should take part in a period of work without paym...
by jennylfm
Tue Jan 05, 2016 9:14 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my task2-healthy diet
Replies: 2
Views: 741

Please assess my task2-healthy diet

Some people think everyone should be a vegetarian, because we do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree? It has been suggested by some that as to stay a healthy diet, all people should eat vegetables and fruits rather than meat. As far as I am concerned, it is undeniab...
by jennylfm
Mon Jan 04, 2016 11:35 am
Forum: Post your speaking
Topic: Part2-Talking about one person who loves traveling by plane
Replies: 5
Views: 12678

Re: Part2-Talking about one person who loves traveling by plane

Hi Cliff, Thanks for your assessment for my speaking. Currently, i practice with one girl who comes from Vietmin regularly. we adopt mock up examination style. Until now, we have practiced about two months, however, i cannot feel any improvements for speaking. Do you have any suggestions about how t...
by jennylfm
Sat Jan 02, 2016 1:48 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please kindly assess my task2-online doctors
Replies: 2
Views: 725

Please kindly assess my task2-online doctors

an increasing number of people are choosing to see doctors online instead of hospitals. do you think this is a positive or negative development? Currently, increasingly, numerous people prefer to see doctors online rather than hospitals. Not surprisingly, it can bring about a lot of benefits to peop...
by jennylfm
Fri Jan 01, 2016 10:12 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task2-causes and solutions( natural resources)
Replies: 5
Views: 7826

Re: Task2-causes and solutions( natural resources)

Hi David, I am confused for strategy2. I read some articles using this temple. But i found that they did not explain too much about the problem, just mention the problems, then most part of the paragraph is to analyse the solutions. For me, I found that when i tried to explain much about the problem...
by jennylfm
Fri Jan 01, 2016 4:52 am
Forum: Post your speaking
Topic: Part2-Talking about one person who loves traveling by plane
Replies: 5
Views: 12678

Re: Part2-Talking about one person who loves traveling by plane

Hi Imoore, Thanks for your great feedbacks, they are really helpful. I did not memorise the answers. I guess that it was because that I recorded for several times for same topic. so you had the feeling that I memorised the answers. Vocabularies, they are my big weaknesses for speaking. During readin...
by jennylfm
Thu Dec 31, 2015 7:10 am
Forum: Post your speaking
Topic: Part2-Talking about one person who loves traveling by plane
Replies: 5
Views: 12678

Part2-Talking about one person who loves traveling by plane

Please access my speaking.

Describe a person who likes to travel by plane

Who this person is
How you know this person
Where this person travels to
Explain why this person likes to travel by plane


Thanks for your help.
by jennylfm
Wed Dec 30, 2015 8:37 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task2-causes and solutions( natural resources)
Replies: 5
Views: 7826

Re: Task2-causes and solutions( natural resources)

Hi David, Thanks for your invaluable feedback and pointing out my grammar mistakes which are very useful for me. Actually, recently days, i am struggling how to write the causes and solutions type topic. Strategy 1: introduction Main paragraph 1: talk the causes Main paragraph2: talk about the solut...
by jennylfm
Tue Dec 29, 2015 2:47 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task2-causes and solutions( natural resources)
Replies: 5
Views: 7826

Task2-causes and solutions( natural resources)

Consumption of the world’s resources(such as oil, fresh water, etc) is increasing at a dangerous rate. What are these causes of the increased consumption? what can people do to reduce it? Depletion of the world’s natural resources including oil and fresh water is rising at a dangerous speed, it is m...
by jennylfm
Tue Dec 29, 2015 2:46 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please kindly access my task2-causes and solutions 1
Replies: 1
Views: 635

Please kindly access my task2-causes and solutions 1

many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists, not local people. The case and what can be done to attract local people? Currently, the main visitors to plenty of local museums and historical spots are tourists rather than local residents. It is argued that the main cause of this a...
by jennylfm
Mon Dec 28, 2015 2:27 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please kindly value my task2-Causes and solutions for consumption of natural resources
Replies: 1
Views: 616

Re: Please kindly value my task2-Causes and solutions for consumption of natural resources

Sorry, I forgot to add the topic.
Consumption of the world’s resources(such as oil, fresh water, etc) is increasing at a dangerous rate. What are these causes of the increased consumption? what can people do to reduce it?
by jennylfm
Mon Dec 28, 2015 6:22 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Reading helps with Speaking and Writing
Replies: 1
Views: 712

Re: Reading helps with Speaking and Writing

This website is great. hope it helps.

http://www.nationalgeographic.com/
by jennylfm
Mon Dec 28, 2015 6:20 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please kindly value my task2-healthcare VS others
Replies: 2
Views: 739

Re: Please kindly value my task2-healthcare VS others

Hello David, Thanks for your feedbacks which drive me think hardly about writing. Good idea, I will do that during my following practice. yes, I should write longer for my supported side and give more specific examples to support it. Actually I feel so confused about the concept of healthcare, I am ...
by jennylfm
Mon Dec 28, 2015 5:49 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please kindly value my task2-Causes and solutions for consumption of natural resources
Replies: 1
Views: 616

Please kindly value my task2-Causes and solutions for consumption of natural resources

Depletion of the world’s natural resources including oil and fresh water is rising at a dangerous speed, it is mainly because of the population boom around the world. This will be proved prior to the potential solutions to mitigate this trend. To begin with, the increasing population around the worl...
by jennylfm
Sun Dec 27, 2015 11:32 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please kindly access my task2-Fast food VS Traditional food
Replies: 4
Views: 963

Re: Please kindly access my task2-Fast food VS Traditional food

Hi David,

Thanks so much. It helps to clear my mind. Now i think i will not make mistakes.

Simple and easy to understand. Thanks for your clarification.

Thanks for your help.

Thanks,
Jenny
by jennylfm
Sun Dec 27, 2015 11:31 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please kindly value my task2-healthcare VS others
Replies: 2
Views: 739

Please kindly value my task2-healthcare VS others

some people say governments should give priority to healthcare, while other believe that taxpayers money should be spent on other important priorities. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Some argue that the government should allocate money and prioritise to offer healthcare to the general pub...
by jennylfm
Sat Dec 26, 2015 2:11 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please kindly access my task2-Fast food VS Traditional food
Replies: 4
Views: 963

Re: Please kindly access my task2-Fast food VS Traditional food

Hi David, Merry Christmas, and happy holidays! I am so happy to receive your "yes" for my writing:) without your generous help, I cannot make progress. Thanks so much. Actually, I feel confused about the linker word" Additionally, furthermore", "firstly, secondly" and o...
by jennylfm
Fri Dec 25, 2015 1:48 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please kindly access my task2-Fast food VS Traditional food
Replies: 4
Views: 963

Please kindly access my task2-Fast food VS Traditional food

Fast food will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional food and traditional methods of food preparation. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this notion? At present, fast food is becoming more and more popular for the people, especially for the young generation from...