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by saqibali
Sat Apr 08, 2017 9:25 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Feedback required on writing task 2 - essay
Replies: 3
Views: 432

Re: Feedback required on writing task 2 - essay

The essay need to follow a proper structure of Ryan. Please check his videos on Youtube.
by saqibali
Sat Apr 08, 2017 8:15 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 (Driving)
Replies: 3
Views: 681

Re: Task 2 (Driving)

Please check my comments which I written at this post. Same apply here

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by saqibali
Sat Apr 08, 2017 8:13 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to
Replies: 2
Views: 725

Re: It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessar

The English and grammar are quite good. However, you need to be on topic. I would suggest you to check Ryan writing book and practice few essays with him. If you can not access this book, then write the main topic many times and brainstorm and plan your essay. Plan each and every paragraph of your e...
by saqibali
Sat Apr 08, 2017 8:04 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: kindly assess my task 2 thanks.
Replies: 3
Views: 284

Re: kindly assess my task 2 thanks.

May I points to aligning the essay much better with the topic?
by saqibali
Fri Mar 17, 2017 2:14 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please could you assess my writing part. Thank you!
Replies: 3
Views: 178

Re: Please could you assess my writing part. Thank you!

Question: Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working from home. Answer: These days, working from remote locations become very frequent in modern world. These days trend of working from remote locations is getting attraction. Technologies become more and more reliable and faster, so compani...
by saqibali
Fri Mar 17, 2017 2:04 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: My task 2 essay.
Replies: 2
Views: 276

Re: My task 2 essay.

Structure is key in essay writing that can be improved only by planning well in advance.

Can you please re write this essay. Both paragraphs should have same length. Both should be summarized in first paragraph.
by saqibali
Fri Mar 17, 2017 1:59 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 From Uzbekistan
Replies: 4
Views: 203

Re: Task 2 From Uzbekistan

I am expecting a tremendous improvement if you rewrite this essay again in the same thread. If I write this essay again, it will not give you opportunity to practice your lack areas.

If you write the same essay again and again and I keep pointing your weaknesses, you would practice much better.
by saqibali
Fri Mar 17, 2017 1:57 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 From Uzbekistan
Replies: 4
Views: 203

Re: Task 2 From Uzbekistan

Most parts of the essay are out of topic.

Please read the topic many times, write down allowed areas of discussion and then again write the first paragraph.

Although the sentences need to be logically connected.
by saqibali
Fri Mar 17, 2017 1:53 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Girls and boys in separate schools!
Replies: 4
Views: 229

Re: Girls and boys in separate schools!

Q: Some people think that it is better to educate girls and boys in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. A: In many parts of the world ( Does this relate to topic that we are allowed...
by saqibali
Fri Mar 17, 2017 1:48 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Girls and boys in separate schools!
Replies: 4
Views: 229

Re: Girls and boys in separate schools!

Farid, 1. Always plan the essay before you write. Write a high level structure on a paper before you start. This practice would help you to write equal length paragraphs and stay on topic. You will be in position to summarize the third and fourth paragraph in first one. May I suggest to see Ryan wri...