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by saqibali
Thu Aug 14, 2014 11:52 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please Rate My General Task 1 Letter:11
Replies: 1
Views: 1329

Re: Please Rate My General Task 1 Letter:11

Train service in your area is reduced. Write a letter to your train company - explain how it affects you - describe the situation - tell the train company what you would like them to do Dear Sir , I am Harsha Senarathne and I am writing this letter to appraise about a severe problem which all the M...
by saqibali
Thu Aug 14, 2014 11:49 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please review and comment my essay
Replies: 1
Views: 1187

Re: Please review and comment my essay

Hi , I have taken the same topic posted by one of our folk in the other thread Some people believe that advertising is useful and informative. Others believe it is useless and only increasing the cost of goods. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Throughout History campaigning of products has...
by saqibali
Thu Aug 14, 2014 11:43 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 1 GT(please dictate and give valuable points)
Replies: 1
Views: 568

Re: Writing Task 1 GT(please dictate and give valuable point

Out of topic
"Leave them for a while"
Thats means you are in filed and you are leaving the team for few minutes.
Please rewrite and we will help you with feedback
by saqibali
Thu Aug 14, 2014 11:42 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS GT Writing Task 2 - Please assess my essay
Replies: 2
Views: 714

Re: IELTS GT Writing Task 2 - Please assess my essay

Capital letters are used unnecessarily.
Topic of essay is not clear to follow and evaluate the essay
by saqibali
Thu Aug 14, 2014 11:38 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS GT Writing Task 2 - Pls Comment on my essay attempt 5
Replies: 4
Views: 1098

Re: IELTS GT Writing Task 2 - Pls Comment on my essay attemp

Some people believe that advertising is useful and informative. Others believe it is useless and only increasing the cost of goods. Discuss both views and give your opinion. More than ever, advertising have[has] become and unavoidable aspect of human life. However, the argument that advertising is ...
by saqibali
Thu Aug 14, 2014 11:30 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: kindly review seems too poorly drafted
Replies: 2
Views: 588

Re: kindly review seems too poorly drafted

Its hard to understand.
Please format this essay
by saqibali
Thu Aug 14, 2014 11:30 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: kindly review seems too poorly drafted
Replies: 2
Views: 588

Re: kindly review seems too poorly drafted

Its hard to understand.
Please format this essay
by saqibali
Thu Aug 14, 2014 11:27 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: LOOK FOR GRAMMAR ERRORS & comment please
Replies: 1
Views: 582

Re: LOOK FOR GRAMMAR ERRORS & comment please

Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning a...
by saqibali
Thu Aug 14, 2014 11:21 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Rejecting Job Opportunities...
Replies: 2
Views: 671

Re: Rejecting Job Opportunities...

Topic?
by saqibali
Wed Aug 13, 2014 5:55 pm
Forum: Post your speaking
Topic: A book Desperate help XD
Replies: 2
Views: 1741

Re: A book Desperate help XD

Please check my response.

http://vocaroo.com/i/s1hOWWbwMgoo
by saqibali
Wed Aug 13, 2014 8:35 am
Forum: IELTS preparation resources
Topic: All Ielts sources centralized
Replies: 0
Views: 3902

All Ielts sources centralized

Each and every book/test/video/any type of content which is available on internet is available on following page.
All are downloadable.
Check all posts of this page.
If you could not find any, message admin.


https://www.facebook.com/pages/IELTS-No ... ?ref=br_tf
by saqibali
Wed Aug 13, 2014 8:33 am
Forum: IELTS preparation resources
Topic: All Ielts books and sources at one place
Replies: 2
Views: 4659

All Ielts books and sources at one place

Each and every book/test/video/any type of content which is available on internet is available on following page.
All are downloadable.
Check all posts of this page.
If you could not find any, message admin.


https://www.facebook.com/pages/IELTS-No ... ?ref=br_tf
by saqibali
Mon Aug 11, 2014 6:28 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS GT Writing Task 2 - Pls Comment on my essay attempt 4
Replies: 6
Views: 1547

Re: IELTS GT Writing Task 2 - Pls Comment on my essay attemp

I will encourage you to rephrase this essay.You can not imagine how much you will improve automatically
by saqibali
Mon Aug 11, 2014 6:24 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: lost on train ( please check)
Replies: 1
Views: 529

Re: lost on train ( please check)

You lost something on the train. Write a letter to the stationmaster of your local train station. In your letter state what the item is describe where you think you lost it explain how you can be contacted in the event the item is found Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any address...
by saqibali
Mon Aug 11, 2014 6:22 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please dictate my essay
Replies: 4
Views: 1107

Re: Please dictate my essay

Work on your grammar Follow Ryan style of letter.Check his videos. Many sentences are off the topic.Think about the topic before you write any sentence. you recently stayed at a hotel and one of the staff was very helpful, write a letter to hotel manager, explain the situation and say what you want ...
by saqibali
Sun Aug 10, 2014 7:29 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate My GT Essay 03
Replies: 2
Views: 595

Re: Please evaluate My GT Essay 03

Some people think that government should band dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your opinion. All over the world, there are plenty of people who are willing to engage in high risk spots , activities and adventur...
by saqibali
Sun Aug 10, 2014 7:26 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please comment my essay COUNTRY'S HEALTH
Replies: 1
Views: 1083

Re: please comment my essay COUNTRY'S HEALTH

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. "Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spendin...
by saqibali
Sat Aug 09, 2014 9:27 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Job Rejection Letter ( Please evaluate my work)
Replies: 2
Views: 599

Re: Job Rejection Letter ( Please evaluate my work)

Grammer issues
See second line
reasons>is This usage is wrong
reasons are
by saqibali
Sat Aug 09, 2014 9:25 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: For review please, Task-II of GT
Replies: 3
Views: 858

Re: For review please, Task-II of GT

Cram one essay of Ryan.This would help you rephrase sentences better
by saqibali
Sat Aug 09, 2014 9:24 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my IELTS TASK 2 GT
Replies: 2
Views: 601

Re: Please assess my IELTS TASK 2 GT

Few sentences are out of topic. Think about all alternative ways in which you can phrase your idea, before you write a sentence.This will improve quality of your sentences. [QUESTION:] Some people believe that cell phones should be for personal use only; others, however, feel cell phones should be u...
by saqibali
Sat Aug 09, 2014 9:22 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please Rate My General Task 1 Letter:9
Replies: 3
Views: 1941

Re: Please Rate My General Task 1 Letter:9

Try to reduce first paragraph in one or two lines.
Please check ryan video on letter
by saqibali
Sat Aug 09, 2014 9:21 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Globalisation ( please review my work)
Replies: 1
Views: 542

Re: Globalisation ( please review my work)

Grammar issues

for example check has and cause relation....It should (has caused)
by saqibali
Sat Aug 09, 2014 9:20 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: International aid
Replies: 1
Views: 413

Re: International aid

Try to use Introduction part as per Ryan advice
by saqibali
Sat Aug 09, 2014 9:19 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: CHILD OBESITY
Replies: 5
Views: 2596

Re: CHILD OBESITY

Try to use introduction paragraph in Ryan style