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by Mahdi99
Tue Jul 21, 2015 11:38 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Academic Task 1, please suggest a band
Replies: 0
Views: 3663

Academic Task 1, please suggest a band

Hey guys, please suggest a band for this response. The two maps compare the city of Castellon in the year 2000 and now. Overall, Castellon is now more cluttered with buildings and constructions than it was back in 2000. The only similarities are that the port, university and city center are still in...
by Mahdi99
Tue Jul 21, 2015 11:15 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Academic Task 1
Replies: 0
Views: 6614

Academic Task 1

Please suggest a band for the following. Feel free to point out mistakes and suggest improvements. Thanks. The picture for which the response is made is attached. The series of images highlight the stages of the production of tomato ketchup. The tomatoes are first picked and put into baskets. Soon a...
by Mahdi99
Tue Jul 21, 2015 11:10 am
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: 1st August IELTS Whatsapp group - Academic
Replies: 45
Views: 185495

Re: 1st August IELTS Whatsapp group - Academic

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by Mahdi99
Mon Jul 20, 2015 4:42 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Is this essay good enough for band 8? (Academic)
Replies: 5
Views: 1731

Re: Is this essay good enough for band 8? (Academic)

My first try using Ryan's format. Please check this essay and suggest a band score. Would be grateful if you suggest improvements. Thanks in advance. What are the pros and cons of children watching television? Children these days are often seen to be heavily occupied with television. Ranging from c...
by Mahdi99
Thu Jul 02, 2015 9:06 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: What do you make of this letter?
Replies: 5
Views: 3985

Re: What do you make of this letter?

Hey Terry. I happen to be an Academic module student, so I can't provide any constructive criticism on this because I honestly don't know how General task 1 is scored. But I think you did a great job. Good linking devices, good grammar and good vocabulary. The only thing (it's a very small mistake, ...
by Mahdi99
Thu Jul 02, 2015 8:47 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 1, Coca Cola
Replies: 4
Views: 1473

Re: Writing Task 1, Coca Cola

Hi again, Lea! The last line is correct now :) "Coca Cola's" can actually mean "Coca Cola is" as well. But the key thing here is the context in which you use it. "Coca Cola's my favorite drink" - here, it means "Coca Cola is" "Coca Cola's sales shot up&qu...
by Mahdi99
Thu Jul 02, 2015 6:31 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 1, Coca Cola
Replies: 4
Views: 1473

Re: Writing Task 1, Coca Cola

Hi Lea :) There is a vocabulary mistake: the first line should say "The given chart and graph" instead of "The give". But I'm assuming this is a typing mistake :) Else, lexical resources are fine. Aside from that, there are a few problems in grammar. Apostrophes are not in place ...
by Mahdi99
Thu Jul 02, 2015 6:01 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Is this essay good enough for band 8? (Academic)
Replies: 5
Views: 1731

Is this essay good enough for band 8? (Academic)

My first try using Ryan's format. Please check this essay and suggest a band score. Would be grateful if you suggest improvements. Thanks in advance. What are the pros and cons of children watching television? Children these days are often seen to be heavily occupied with television. Ranging from ca...