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by avijit_05
Wed Jul 29, 2015 6:20 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Query on speaking test
Replies: 1
Views: 1318

Query on speaking test

Hi David, recently i appeared for my speaking test and to my surprize it was to fast. Examiner was jumping from one topic to another and i felt I was not given enough time to speak and explain my answers. I was often interrupted. My test was done in less than 10 mins !!!!. Is this they way test are ...
by avijit_05
Sun Jul 26, 2015 5:08 pm
Forum: IELTS preparation resources
Topic: Best website for speaking practice
Replies: 5
Views: 12188

Re: Best website for speaking practice

hi luma
thanks for sharing .
this is really good website
by avijit_05
Fri Jul 24, 2015 6:24 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Importance of old buildings Task#2 Pls give ur feedback
Replies: 1
Views: 2223

Importance of old buildings Task#2 Pls give ur feedback

Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nation’s history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by news ones. How important is it to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way of progress? My attempt In today’s world it is seen that many governments are wo...
by avijit_05
Thu Jul 23, 2015 6:47 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Question on writing evaluation
Replies: 3
Views: 1988

Question on writing evaluation

Hi David, Could you tell us, 1.What approx number error means few errors/occasional error? Is wrong article counted as an error? 2. I read somewhere you said "essay grading as per their computer system". When you say computer system , essay is evaluated by system or human? 3. Do they look ...
by avijit_05
Thu Jul 23, 2015 5:16 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: General Training - IELTS - Please Evaluate - Artists Freedom
Replies: 1
Views: 3800

Re: General Training - IELTS - Please Evaluate - Artists Freedom

Hi i feel if you add one more sentence to reinforce your idea , essay will become more impressive. Ex :- Lastly for their own publicity, and to draw the attention of the young minds, Artists may proceed to draw and picturise women in an unethical way, that is by posting vulgar pictures in their maga...
by avijit_05
Thu Jul 23, 2015 4:55 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Letters 3, 4 (Preparation)
Replies: 5
Views: 1417

Re: Letters 3, 4 (Preparation)

hi
first letter does not answer "explain why you have moved".
in terms of task achievement you might loose marks.

thx
by avijit_05
Sun Jul 19, 2015 5:41 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: GT Task one :- pls review and provide feedback
Replies: 2
Views: 744

Re: GT Task one :- pls review and provide feedback

Hi Avijit, I'm no expert in English, my spelling and grammar sucks, but I have some comments. In the opening we can clearly se why or what you are writing about, which is good. but you have some formulations that can be improved to be more clear. I would also try to write it in a more neutral tone,...
by avijit_05
Sun Jul 19, 2015 1:36 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: GT Task one :- pls review and provide feedback
Replies: 2
Views: 744

GT Task one :- pls review and provide feedback

You have visited another city in your country. Prior to the visit you requested some information from a tourist centre, but the information was incorrect. Write a letter to the manager of the centre and say - What information were you looking for? - What was incorrect in it? - What happened to you b...
by avijit_05
Sun Jul 19, 2015 12:46 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please critique my letter
Replies: 11
Views: 4025

Re: Please critique my letter

Hi Can you please provide feedback on my attempt. Hi Kate, I hope you enjoying your vacation and hope this letter finds you in a good mood. I am writing this to invite you to a party and tell you good news in office. We have decided to celebrate my son's first birthday. Although he completed his one...
by avijit_05
Sun Jul 19, 2015 11:45 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my essay.
Replies: 3
Views: 953

Re: Please evaluate my essay.

Hi there, A reasonably high standard essay. I suggest that you consider using 'comma' more to improve the reading flow of the essay. For example: - ‘unlike cash cards are easy to handle and provide flexibility’ – comma between ‘cash’ and ‘cards’ ‘In addition to that, unlike cash it is easy to keep ...
by avijit_05
Fri Jul 17, 2015 5:13 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my essay.
Replies: 3
Views: 953

Please evaluate my essay.

Nowadays plastic money replacements such as credit and debit cards are extremely popular, even more than banknotes and coins. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Include your personal opinion and examples based on your own experience. In this modern era, people are readily accepting ne...
by avijit_05
Thu Jul 16, 2015 6:00 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can somebody help me in evaluating my essay# New Technologies
Replies: 0
Views: 902

Can somebody help me in evaluating my essay# New Technologies

New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumer. To what extent do you agree of disagree with this opinion. New technologies, in particular the Internet has changed the world we live in. Undoubtedly, these advances plays a prominent role in global trade and com...
by avijit_05
Wed Jul 01, 2015 5:48 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Query on General Writing task 2
Replies: 1
Views: 1074

Query on General Writing task 2

Hi , Query Regarding General task 2 1. Is is true that if we write more words >275 we get more marks and to get a band of 8 approx 300 words should be written? 2. If we write introduction para using few words from question , that is not counted as word count? Is this correct? 3. Is space given suffi...
by avijit_05
Wed Jul 01, 2015 5:21 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 Essay on hobby :- Please evaluate
Replies: 2
Views: 2296

Re: Task 2 Essay on hobby :- Please evaluate

Thanks Flick for your correction.
by avijit_05
Sun Jun 28, 2015 7:29 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly critique and provide a band score
Replies: 2
Views: 673

Re: Kindly critique and provide a band score

Hi, 1.I find this essay very easy to follow and your points were very clear. 2., but sometimes its practicle impossible --- it is "practically" . Could you pls provide ur feedback on mine. In today's world majority of the companies face a difficult task, how to to decision making?. It is f...
by avijit_05
Sun Jun 28, 2015 7:18 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Tsk 2 general evaluation required
Replies: 3
Views: 712

Re: Tsk 2 general evaluation required

hi , 1.In conclusion : - why it is important to believe ? why u want reader to believe ? In my view it should be just " it is important. 2."Recent research" i guess it should be researches. As you are referring to be specific research 3.I think in second para to continue the flow you ...
by avijit_05
Sun Jun 28, 2015 7:07 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Urge to all people taking test.
Replies: 0
Views: 636

Urge to all people taking test.

Hi All Test Takers, We really want our work to be evaluated and that is the main reason we are posting our writings here. I could see lot of people posting but there is no feedback and suggestions. Everybody is just reading the task and providing no inputs for improvement. I did not get any feedback...
by avijit_05
Wed Jun 24, 2015 4:50 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 1:- Letter to friend about learning driving
Replies: 3
Views: 8877

Task 1:- Letter to friend about learning driving

Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice.Write a letter to your friend in your letter -say why a driving letter is advantageous -recommend a driving school -give any extra guidance/tips Below is my attempt:- Dear John, I am glad to know that you are planning to lear...
by avijit_05
Tue Jun 23, 2015 11:55 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools - Please Evaluate
Replies: 3
Views: 21853

Re: physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools - Please Evaluate

Hi I like the way you have introduce the topic " lets take a deep dive on this thought, but looks like this is a short essay. Morover if you see the standard essay it is in always in 4 para's . This essay has two diff ides which can be splitted in two para. In addition to that - in my view a be...
by avijit_05
Tue Jun 23, 2015 11:21 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Environmental problems and solution
Replies: 3
Views: 21669

Re: Environmental problems and solution

HI , I am also new to essay writing. My few observation are below. 1.authority should impose --- authorities , should be pural in my view. 2.Due to poor regulator -- poor regulations 3.This can be easily evident -- this is evident. 4.deforestation which had leads to an increase -- has lead to . 5.bu...
by avijit_05
Tue Jun 23, 2015 10:58 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 Essay on hobby :- Please evaluate
Replies: 2
Views: 2296

Task 2 Essay on hobby :- Please evaluate

Question : - Few peoepl devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effects this has on the individual and the society in general. My essay :- A hobby is a way to spend spare time constructively and creatively. From historical ages, people engage themselves to learn ...
by avijit_05
Mon Jun 22, 2015 4:59 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Ways that Techlology affect the types of relationship people make-Please Evaluate
Replies: 4
Views: 861

Re: Ways that Techlology affect the types of relationship people make-Please Evaluate

Hi
WRT second arguement , how technology has made transportation quicker is not clear.
Para is telling importance of transportation , how is it related to tech?
Trasportation is not technology !!!!.

thx
by avijit_05
Mon Jun 22, 2015 4:50 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Marriage Age topic--- need a 6.5-8 band !!!
Replies: 3
Views: 6975

Re: Marriage Age topic--- need a 6.5-8 band !!!

My thoughts:- 1."It has been a hot debate " looks incorrect - It has been debated a lot. 2. Intro first sentense is too long and difficult to follow. 3. until this process will repeat himself or process repeats itself ? 4. wich spelling is incorrect. 5. "First of all, a crucial import...
by avijit_05
Fri Jun 19, 2015 2:39 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: One of my first letters, please critique.(need 8)
Replies: 6
Views: 2162

Re: One of my first letters, please critique.(need 8)

Hi Below is my ans. Pls evaluate. " Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction for the recently conducted " Auto CAD design course". This was a hands on experience course conducted by Master Design Institute. I regret to tell you that the arrangements done ...
by avijit_05
Fri Jun 19, 2015 1:40 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: One of my first letters, please critique.(need 8)
Replies: 6
Views: 2162

Re: One of my first letters, please critique.(need 8)

well in the context which u hv written i feel " strict attendance record should be taken, and people who who have enrolled in advance should only be allowed to attend the class. No last minute entry should be allowed, supervisor shd ensure etc " may sound appropriate . BTW how are when is ...