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by tuananhchau
Wed Jul 15, 2015 12:06 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Should online learning be replaced instead of traditional ways?
Replies: 0
Views: 859

Should online learning be replaced instead of traditional ways?

Recently there has been no shortage of discussion about blending technological advances such as the Internet into teaching institutions as well as learning strategies. Personally, I strongly object to this change for many reasons, as will now be presented. Primarily, leading a sedentary lifestyle pr...
by tuananhchau
Thu Jul 09, 2015 9:23 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please, check it " Is freedom of speech necessary in a free society?"
Replies: 2
Views: 1031

Re: Please, check it " Is freedom of speech necessary in a free society?"

hi, I have one suggestion:
in the first sentence of the conclusion, it would be better if you wrote ' while' instead of whereas :mrgreen:
by tuananhchau
Thu Jul 09, 2015 9:19 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2. Please evaluate my essay!
Replies: 4
Views: 1047

Re: Writing task 2. Please evaluate my essay!

thank you for your suggestion, I'll be sure to be less robotic
by tuananhchau
Thu Jul 02, 2015 1:47 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2. Please evaluate my essay!
Replies: 4
Views: 1047

Re: Writing task 2. Please evaluate my essay!

thank you for your reply but your comment are quite unconnected to the the general content of my essay
by tuananhchau
Wed Jul 01, 2015 7:28 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2. Please evaluate my essay!
Replies: 4
Views: 1047

Writing task 2. Please evaluate my essay!

There is a general consensus nowadays that the increasing in average weight of people is in reverse ratio with the levels of health and fitness. This essay shall look into some possible causes and give appropriate solutions to address this phenomenon. Gaining weight in people can be sparked for many...
by tuananhchau
Wed Jul 01, 2015 7:08 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Women and child care - please assess my Academic WT2 as soon as possible.
Replies: 13
Views: 7619

Re: Women and child care - please assess my Academic WT2 as soon as possible.

I have only one suggestion:
' adults females' => female adults :mrgreen:
by tuananhchau
Wed Jul 01, 2015 3:39 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: globalization and cultural identity. Please help correct my essay!
Replies: 1
Views: 2136

globalization and cultural identity. Please help correct my essay!

It goes without saying that the globalization has been occurring prominently recently resulting in the quick blur of borders between different cultures. However, people therefore fear that this global changing might inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity. In my opinion, I completely ...
by tuananhchau
Wed Jun 17, 2015 10:56 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please mark my essay ( targeting band 6.5)
Replies: 2
Views: 690

Re: please mark my essay ( targeting band 6.5)

thank you so much for your reply but can my essay reach to Ielts 6.5 band score?
by tuananhchau
Wed Jun 10, 2015 11:54 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Online studying. Please leave comments about my essay
Replies: 0
Views: 1385

Online studying. Please leave comments about my essay

Topic: University lecturers are now able to put their lectures on the Internet for students to read and so the importance of attending face to face lectures has been reduced. Do you believe the use of the Internet in formal education is a good idea? What future effects will the Internet have on acad...
by tuananhchau
Tue Jun 09, 2015 1:34 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: writting task 2: sport, role models. Please mark my essay
Replies: 0
Views: 1146

writting task 2: sport, role models. Please mark my essay

Topic: Some people think that professional athletes make good role models for young people, while others believe they don’t. Discuss both these points of views and give your own opinion. There is no denying that professional athletes nowadays have become famous public figures and sporting rock stars...
by tuananhchau
Fri Jun 05, 2015 2:52 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: IELTS Academic Overall Band 7 Mastermind Group (4-5 People)
Replies: 5
Views: 2204

Re: IELTS Academic Overall Band 7 Mastermind Group (4-5 People)

hi, I also share the same goal, can I join your group?
by tuananhchau
Fri Jun 05, 2015 2:49 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Speaking Model answer 8.0
Replies: 1
Views: 1342

Re: Speaking Model answer 8.0

Wow, the tutor in the video actually tried speaking 2 voices at a time. Thanks for sharing such a great speaking model :D
by tuananhchau
Fri Jun 05, 2015 12:04 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please mark my essay ( targeting band 6.5)
Replies: 2
Views: 690

please mark my essay ( targeting band 6.5)

Topic: Advances in science and technology have solved many problems. However, they also created new problems. Discuss some of the new problems caused by technological advancement and give your opinion on how they should be dealt with. Now people are begining to realise that advances in scientific an...
by tuananhchau
Fri Jun 05, 2015 11:53 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my first essay
Replies: 1
Views: 399

Please evaluate my first essay

Questions: Illiteracy has traditionally been view as largely as a third world problem. However, it is becoming apparent that in countries such as the USA and Australia, illiteracy is on the increase. Discuss possible cause for this and its effect on society. It is generally accepted that education i...