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by David.IELTS.Examiner
Mon Jan 16, 2017 5:31 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my essay. Please Please. Thank you.
Replies: 1
Views: 41

Re: Please evaluate my essay. Please Please. Thank you.

Hello! A very good question! The main problem with your answer is that you point out the advantage of taking a wider variety of courses, but then totally dismiss this in your conclusion. If it is so good, you certainly must say why you don't recommend it. This quite a common problem. Many candidates...
by David.IELTS.Examiner
Mon Jan 16, 2017 5:25 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: An academic task 1 , please evaluate and give score if possible
Replies: 2
Views: 60

Re: An academic task 1 , please evaluate and give score if possible

Hello! This is a good report. you have included enough data and made some good comparisons and used fractions to express proportions. There is some very good vocabulary (minor proportion, exploited) and grammar is good with relatively few errors. Organisation is clear with some good use of connectiv...
by David.IELTS.Examiner
Mon Jan 16, 2017 5:21 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: task 1 letter writing.. kindly evaluate:)
Replies: 1
Views: 51

Re: task 1 letter writing.. kindly evaluate:)

Hello! Capital letters for Sir and Madam. The letter is clear and you have included all three points, as required. Vocabulary is good. Grammar is also good (past tense!) and there are not many mistakes. There really is some good phrasing here - Despite complaining repeatedly ..., I expect a full ref...
by David.IELTS.Examiner
Mon Jan 16, 2017 5:17 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: would you please assess this essay
Replies: 3
Views: 53

Re: would you please assess this essay

Hello! This is actually a good essay! Points are clear and developed. Vocabulary is very good (ideological, fanatic, harsh) and there is a good range of grammar, despite many errors. In the conclusion, there is a glaring error. you state that the rights of the victim are paramount, but the victim is...
by David.IELTS.Examiner
Mon Jan 16, 2017 5:12 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please, evaluate my task 1
Replies: 1
Views: 44

Re: Please, evaluate my task 1

Hello! The only real problem - and unfortunately, it's a BIG one - is that you haven't included enough of the statistical information. This is necessary when only a limited amount of data (12 in this case) is in the diagrams. Vocabulary is good, and would be better if more data was included, I'm goi...
by David.IELTS.Examiner
Mon Jan 16, 2017 5:09 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please, evaluate my essay
Replies: 2
Views: 45

Re: Please, evaluate my essay

Hello! You have put the solution together with the conclusion - they must be separated. Ideas are reasonable, though standard. I'm not sure that the point about absorption is correct. Vocabulary is good. Grammar is a little weak. There are numerous errors, some basic (One of the possibilities are .....
by David.IELTS.Examiner
Mon Jan 16, 2017 5:03 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: That is my first ever writing task, could you please leave your feedback, Thank you!
Replies: 1
Views: 44

Re: That is my first ever writing task, could you please leave your feedback, Thank you!

Hello! I have just watched the latest episode of 'Sherlock', so what an appropriate letter! This is a good letter. All points have been answered and developed clearly. vocabulary is good in both range and accuracy. The weakness is grammar - though not bad, there is a limited range and quite a lot of...
by David.IELTS.Examiner
Mon Jan 16, 2017 5:01 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please , I need your feed back .. Thanking you in advance
Replies: 1
Views: 40

Re: Please , I need your feed back .. Thanking you in advance

Hello! Your conclusion is not expressed as a personal opinion, although your opinion is quite clear. Some of your points are unclear, largely because you failed to use modals or suitable adverbs. For instance, you say that celebrities can do what they like, then say that they constantly have their p...
by David.IELTS.Examiner
Sun Jan 15, 2017 8:35 am
Forum: Post your speaking
Topic: will be grateful for the assessment
Replies: 1
Views: 48

Re: will be grateful for the assessment

Hello! Fluency - Very good speed. Not many pauses in part 1, but quite a lot in parts 2 and 3 Coherence - Very good use of connectives Vocabulary - not afraid of hard work, good at meeting deadlines Grammar - Good basic grammar and a variety of complex structures Pronunciation - Clear with some into...
by David.IELTS.Examiner
Fri Jan 13, 2017 10:27 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: T2 help is highly appreciated
Replies: 1
Views: 63

Re: T2 help is highly appreciated

Hello! It's not blowing my mind. The argument in the first main paragraph is unclear/invalid. If few male/female students choose a subject, this will be reflected in fewer female/male students being accepted also, to keep numbers equal. However, the last sentence is true. As for the second main para...

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